KatherineP, what a brillent poem of reality for so many people who think they are actually sharing a love through their relationship when in fact its nothing more than a lustful fling that fills their immediate needs. I just adore the message you are sharing with your readers through your wonderful gift of poetry. Thank You for sharing more of yourself and especially your fine talents in the art of poetic literature.
M Hattie, What a poem of fact for almost everyone as yes in deed we all reflect upon our past and must now live with those demons. I really like the way you have composed this message through your poetic gift. Wonderful Poem.
KatherineP, I want you to know this poem drips with heartfelt emotions from you cast outwards to your readers. I am sorry for your loss but so glad you have decided to share yourself with others and especially your words of poetry. Wonderful Poem.
Alwaysandforever4376, I really enjoyed the message within this piece as the words pour from your heart outwards to your readers. I am currious and want to ask if you meant to include had in the following line, "For a tender had to give some loving care" I am thinking you meant hand lol. Thank You for sharing both your wonderful words of poetry and a little of yourself with all of us.
Rik LightKnight, You hit the mark right on the head as the closing was the part that spoke volumes to this reader. Thank You for sharing your gift of poetry with us all and for giving us a small part of your creative personality. Wonderful Job.
Tracy Lynn, One would have to be crazy to pass this amazing piece by as you have composed brillence. Thank You for sharing both your love of poetic words and for giving us a small part of yourself. Wonderfully Done.
Hidden Engagement, What a powerful poem of reality for so many others living a fake or phony life to fit in. I applaud you for both the strength to tackle such a topic and for composing such a meaningful poem for all to view. One can only hope that many others will take note and learn to just be themselves and not be molded into something they are not. Thank You so much for giving us such a wonderful poem to savor and especially for giving us a small part of yourself. Excellent Meaningful Poem.
Tiny Tornado, You are quite the success as I read your brief intro and just like you said it shows the crying cycle and ends with a happy note. I really appreciated your writing style and now I want to Thank You for the smile. I feel so Honored to have this chance to be amongst so many wonderfully gifted people and will be watching for more from you. Excellent Poem.
Elizabeth Newport, I really like this amazing composure by you as your poetic brillence is shining brightly. One sure fire way of knowing is for those that have mastered the ability of hearing their heart speaking to them and most have never harnessed this amazing feat. I want to Thank You for painting such a meaningful picture through your words of art and its important to know you have touched one heart. Wonderful Poem.
Dara, what an amzing poem by you reflecting back to such a human disaster. The meaning you have composed is right on the mark as I now say Thank You for sharing your wonderful poetic talent with us all and for giving us a small part of your creative personality. Wonderful Job.
Thaleia Melpomene, As a reader of this amazing creative story I am impressed with your ability of creating such vivid images captured within the minds eye. For this being your rough draft I can say that not much refining needs to be done as the detail is all in place and your readers can feel the emotional impact you may be seeking as its author. Thank You for sharing such a creative side of you and for giving us a small part of yourself. Looking very good My Friend.
JRS, what a powerful message of reality you have composed for your readers to view and hopefully understand. Many a friendships have been spoiled as the relationship progresses to the next level and you have composed this beautifully. Thank You for sharing your poetic art with us all and for giving us a little of yourself.
Butterfly528, Once again you reach out and give us another small part of yourself along with your poetic brillence to savor as we feed our appetite for more, more and more. As you type your key board keys into words of pleasure helping your reading seekers to find another poetic treasure. Another wonderful poem by you Butterfly528 as I say Thank You for sharing.
Gypsyrose, I am so impressed with the image you paint with your words of choice for your readers to vividly see. Whats more is the emotional imapct you project upon all that view your poetic composure. Thank You for sharing both your wonderful words of literature and especially for giving us a little of yourself. Wonderful Poem.
Oh Welsh_Chick, I wonder just how many will be able to actually relate to this reality of emotions. I would venture to say at least 99.9% as most still have strong feelings for their very first love. I really like what you have done because you have actually caused me to reflect back in time and recall some of those meaningful memories. Thank You so much for gently touching such a beautiful part of my past life and allowing me to relive history. Amazing Poem.
Yes in deed E as life has many ups and downs and the human emotions are streatched and shrunk many times throughout our lives. At times it may seem to be like we are on a roller coaster that never stops as we attempt to get off many times but fail. Thank You for sharing your poetic brillence and a small part of yourself with all of us. Wonderful Poem.
Stargazer, I read this here poem from beginning to start, you are impressive at displaying your art. Just like a brush as you paint your words, your beautiful words of poetry will always be heard. Thank You so much for sharing your outstanding gift with us all as I now say good luck in the contest my friend.
JRS, what an in depth message of reality you have composed here as I often ponder how many possible relationships have never begun due to these very emotions. I really enjoyed this and hope many others will as well as I now say Thank You for sharing such a brillent piece and a little of yourself with all of us. Wonderful Poem My Friend.
Mr. B. What an interesting insight on being a cheerio as you have managed to give a food item life with emotions. I really like this piece and want to Thank You for creating such a wonderful piece to feed our appetite for more from you. Thank You for being a part of this wonderful site and for being such an Inspiration for many.
Ptgirl, I really like the descriptive words you have used to enhance your amazing poem. Just like a magnet you drew me in through the title and then captured my interest all the way through. Outstanding work my friend as I now Thank You for sharing both your love of literature with us all and for giving us a small part of yourself through your wonderful gift.
Nurse Writer, I am impressed with your writing style as you have managed to take a childs dream and end it with something real. What a creative imagination you have and now I can't wait to lay my eyes upon more from you. Thank You so much for sharing a little of yourself and especially your wonderful gift of writing with us all. Wonderful Job.
Freeflow, I really enjoyed the message you have composed here as I know for certain that many others have felt these emotions at one time or another and have lived this same type of reality. Now I want to Thank You for sharing your words of poetry and a little of yourself with all of us.
Iguru, Interesting poem as the insights towards the future with hope was outstanding. I enjoyed your creative writing style as some parts could actually become captured within my minds eye and this is a feat many authors try and fail. I say very well done my friend.
Diana, what a meaningful poem of dedication to your Father and all Dads. I want to reach out to you and let you know this poem and especially your creative talent is truly appreciated. Thank You for sharing your love of poetry and yourself with us all.
Bryan, A very interesting read here as I know for a fact this happens to a lot of good folk that worry about the condition of their place when visitors are expected. I say, whats wrong with a place looking lived in rather than living in a place that is a showcase place all the time? I like the message you have sent your readers.
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