Oh My Indygirl63, you have captured the story of titanic beautifully in short form. I really like your writing style and the way it feels as though you reach right out and take my hand on and lead me on a brief journey together with you as to feel the emotions you are projecting outwards for your audience. You are am amazing writer and I commend you for a job well done. Thank You for being the beautiful person you are from the inside out and for sharing your wonderful gift of writing with us all and especially for being my friend Indygirl63.
Oh wow Indygirl63, I really enjoyed the creative descriptions of your darker side of creative talent. The picture you paint becomes vividly clear for your readers to clearly see through their minds eye. You are such a well rounded poet and one I find myself drifting closer to with the hopes that a small part of yourself may rub off onto me. Love your creative writing Indygirl63.
Oh wow Indygirl63, you have given us yet another keepsake treasure to forever have and hold from you. The message is clear and I know many feel these feelings but be reassured you are never alone because you have found a wonderful blooming friendship through me. I would love to be your savior and to me that was the most meaningful part of this amazing poem as your talent once again shines for myself and other readers who await anything and everything from You indygirl63. Thank You once again for sharing more of yourself with all of us and for giving us another precious poem to savor.
Wow Kiki, what a meaningful poem you have composed here for your readers to savor. All I can say is Move, give us more of You. Thank You for giving us a sample of your amazing talent as a writer and especially for a small part of yourself. Wonderful Poem Kiki.
Julie, your emotions splash all over the page in a very meaningful way of reality that many couples face and deal with each day. Thank You for sharing such a difficult situation in poetic form for your readers to see and become aware that these kinds of relationships can be so destructive for one and sometimes both parties. You are so gifted in many ways and its my Honor to have this chance to be a friend to a beautiful person from the inside out and one that is extremely gifted. Amazing Poem Julie...
Wow AngryGirl6, what a wonderful poem that drips with heartfelt emotion that reflects the feelings of many. I want to commend you for such a masterpiece of reality. Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift of writing with all of us and especially for giving us a little of yourself to know and grow close to as friends. Please do not stop or consider placing your poetic pen down, because you would be so missed causing your readers to bear a frown. Awesome Poem AngryGirl6.
Ruri-Puri, I can see why you received an A, this poem touches many on this day. Your talent shines so very bright, making your readers feel alright. Thank You for sharing such a meaningful poem with us all and for giving us a small part of yourself. Amazing poem as I would not change a thing as its perfect.
Oh My Phantom Gurl, once again you paint such an emotionally charged picture of reality that many can relate to. Wow, I enjoy exposing myself to your amazing writing style with the hopes that a small part of you may rub off onto me as your talent shines brightly. Thank You once again for another meaningful poem of reality and more importantly for giving us more of you. Please keep your pens ink flowing so your amazing poetry keeps growing.
Phantom Gurl, I commend you for painting such a vivid picture of reality for many in todays society. its seems to be the norm nowdays to play with others emotions to gain nothing more than a mechanical function that lasted for just a few short moments. Its sad to see the direction by bad choices many are taking. I really enjoyed the message you have given to us all through your wonderful talent in poetic literature. I would not change a thing here as its perfect the way its presented. Thank You for giving us a little of yourself and your wonderful gift of writing.
Clarie, its sad that any woman would have to endure physical and mental abuse by any man. I am glad you have composed such a meaningful poem to maintain awareness that this evil deed still goes on and somehow needs to stop. I commend you for such a wonderful poem and now want to Thank You for sharing your writing gift with us all and for giving us all a little of yourself.
Oh Julie, what a wonderful poem you have composed here as every single person has often pondered this if question. I really like your approach to this and especially love the way you have composed it into a meaningful poem for your readers to savor. Thank You for sharing your poetic brillence with us all and for giving us more of you. Amazing Poem Julie.
Tessa Marie, I will always enjoy viewing your wonderful words of poetry as you always turn such a meaningful story into beautiful words of poetry. Writers like yourself need to keep this ugly war alive through sharing our creative talents to maintain some awareness for the readers. Its sad that mankind has to know and continue on with the bloodshed of war and violence. Thank You for sharing more of yourself with us all and for giving us yet another meaningful poem. You are so awesome Tessa Marie.
Wow Rider Girl, this piece is wonderful as I always enjoy having the chance to read more from you. The verse that really popped out for me was this one, "Some day a morning will come When the light of peace will dwell" Peace is the one thing mankind has been waiting for through many generations and its sad to think it may never come. Once again, I Thank You for sharing your poetic gift with us all and especially for giving us a little more of you as I always enjoy reading your wonderful words of poetry. You Be Awesome Rider Girl.
Gemini Poet, What a lovely poem of dedication to your Father and the love you shared. I really enjoyed this poem and its sincere message of love from you to him and for all readers of your gifted talent. Thank You for sharing such a meaningful poem for all to cherish and savor. More importantly, Thank You for giving us all a little of yourself. Please keep your pens ink flowing so your awesome words of poetry keeps growing.
Barnabas, what a beautiful little poem for your someone special as it drips with such a meaningful emotion. I commend you for a job well done as I now Thank You for sharing your love of poetic literature with us all and for giving us all a little of yourself.
Butterflyofdeath, as a past practioner of Phychiatric nursing I understand the mental disorganization of one being either physically and/or mentally abused most of their lives. Its sad that this and other forms of abuse continues on from generation to generation without proper intervention and counseling. Working in the penal system now I see the damages caused through the abuses and being caused by allowing the wrong educational experts experimenting on ones mental being. What I mean is that the penal system uses social workers instead of mental practioners for their intervention and counseling of the population and in the long term effects will cause more damage than good. Thank You for sharing your wonderful insights and to help create some extreme awareness into this type of senario currently being played and blooming in our every day life.
Tessa Marie, Yes in deed things will never be the same as the world around us is always changing but inside we remain the same. Everyone makes mistakes as its a fact of life and yes people look at us in different ways but on the inside we remain the same. I really enjoyed this poem and especially the moment of time I spent with the author by reading and then leaving a part of myself for you to always have. You are awesome Tessa and I adore your writing style.
Oh Rider Girl, What a meaningful Poem you have composed here as one can only hope others can clearly hear the message before its too late. One must cherrish what they have today for tomorrow it may be gone forever never to come back. You are an amazing writer Rider Girl and I always enjoy reading your fine creations of poetry.
Sariah, I commend you for a wonderful poem describing the real meaning of our home. Yes in deed you are so right as there is no place like your own home to feel secure and content. Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift of poetic literature with us all and more importantly for giving us all a small part of yourself. I hope your pens ink may always flow across sheets of paper as your readers eagerly await your next poetic caper. Wonderful Poem Sariah.
Oh Wow Birdie, Yes in deed the emotional feelings of confusion like being on a roller coaster until you kow something for sure is so trying. I like this poem by you as your talent is awesome as I now say Thank You for sharing your wonderful gift of writing with all of us and for giving us a little of you. Wonderful Poem of reality for everyone Birdie.
Paulina Beech, I like the message you have composed here for your readers to ponder. It amazes me how some folks have these kind of thoughts when we were all created the same and equal. Thank You for sharing yourself and for giving us such a wonderful poem of real meaning to ponder.
Rider Girl, Another wonderful poem by such a gifted poet. I really like your writing style as you always seem to reach right out and stroke your readers emotions to feel as you felt during your poems creation. Its amazing just how many actually seem to be wearing a mask so to speak to cover their true self and show their true emotions. I thank you once again for sharing your poetic brillence once again with us and especially for giving us all a little more of you. May you always allow your pens ink to write as you have at least one reading fan smiling bright.
Rider Girl, Yes in deed there are many attractive elements that draw us closer to those we want to be with. You have composed it beautifully through your smooth flowing and meaningful words of choice. Thank You for giving us all a little of yourself and your creative personality. I can only hope you may always let your pens ink flow across sheets of paper as we your readers eagerly await your next poetic caper. Wonderful Poem Rider Girl.
Judy, what a beautiful meaning you have composed here as the special someone you adore has made you into the wonderful woman you are and now we as your readers reap the benefits as you have decided to share your gift with us all through your writing. More importantly, we have the Honor of having a little of you to share as we all grow together through our love of literature. Thank You so much for sharing yourself and your gift with us all. Please always keep your pens ink flowing so your words of poetry may keep growing.
Oh Jane, what a lovely tribute to a meaningful eternity with the one you truly love. The descriptions are beautifully done and the emotional content is vividly clear. Thank You so much for giving us more of you and your wonderful creative talent.
James
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