This is good. I didn't notice any problems with spelling or grammer. I like the way you made the feelings jump out. I felt like I was the one sitting in the dark room. KEEP WRITING AND HAVE FUN. DON'T LET ANYTHING GET YOU DOWN.
This is pretty good. It reads well, however I would have made it more than one sentence. Maybe if you were to seperate it and make it a few sentences it would read a little more fluently. I am not a pro at reveiwing. Thats just my opinion. KEEP WRITING AND HAVE FUN!!
I had no choice but to rate you at a 5. You touched my heart with every line. I almost cried just reading it. It reeminds me so much of me. I have felt that way for years. All I can say to you is Keep on writing. You do a wonderful job of making people feel what you write. Keep doing what you do.
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