Your writing is so realistic that it's like having a bucket of ice water thrown in your face! It's like wow, this could actually be happening right this minute. The way you write just seems to be along the lines of a whirlpool, it just keeps dragging the reader down farther and farther. I think that you are an amzing writer.
I'm not really into horror stuff, but your grammer and spelling are good enough to be worshipped. The title of yyour story made me think of Pinks 'funhouse', so I guess that's why I looked into it. I really like the way that you do personalities though. You make the people in story seem very real.
That was amazing!! You could almost step into the story and be the main character. You have an amazing way of dragging the reader in and making them live the story. I also love the way that you used an older backdrop. I would say that you would have a knack for older settings.
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