Well done, a very nice continuation to the previous story and equally as
emotional. I had a clear vision of your characters in my head and your story was
plausible; I believed it and that's an important element between the writer and
the reader. I remained connected to your story and wanted to read it to the end.
Keep up the good work!
Your story was well written and very emotional. It was hard for me not to be sad.
The job of a good writer and the story he/she writes is to tug on the emotions of
the reader. Well done. Of course, I'll have to read her story next. You've done an
excellent job in hooking the reader. My applause!
Great article! You hit on some very valid points and people seem to forget that
the reader's compassion about the story is an important issue. Thanks for your
insights and thoughts. They will be very helpful to those who read your article.
I've always wanted to go to Tuscany; now I think I'm reconsidering after reading
your very entertaining poem! I had fun reading it and laughed a lot! You wrote a
very lively piece that kept my attention. Great job! Keep the wonderful writing
coming!
This is a well written and thought out story that kept me wanting to read more.
The first sentence grabbed me and I couldn't stop reading from that point on.
Your story flowed very well and has great character and characters. You
handled the flow of dialogue well and kept me interested. Well done!
Nicely done, your poem had rhythm and seemed to leap off my computer
screen. I love your word choices. And yes, you did have me wondering about
that virginal harpsichord! Excellent poem.
Writing does help you deal with loss and it helps you find yourself as well. I'm
sorry to hear about your friend, but sharing your loss is a part of the healing
process. I enjoyed reading your piece. Thanks for sharing.
I like the twist you offer in this old saying. It was funny; I couldn't help laughing at the Puke VS Pass Out fight. The story was well written and very entertaining.
Excellent job!
Interesting, keep working at it. I like the fact that you've developed
your own words; it's a very creative touch. You're on the right track
with the story. It's full of action and keeps the reader engaged. Keep
up the good work!
Nice job. It kept me interested and the flow of the story was even.
Not bad for a newbie. Read books as well as do Facebook, if you
must, but keep on writing!!
This piece made me stop and reflect and people who have passed
on in my life; it was very sad but necessary and it being the
holidays we should never forget those who are no longer with us
on the physical plane. Thanks for your poem.
This was great. I couldn't help chuckling at the end even though I
l knew where the story was going. Danny Devito was clear in my
mind as a read the story. It was a visual piece and well-written.
Nice work!!
I hardly know where to begin with this one; we use words to express
our feelings. I only wish you could see my reaction. So, I will do my
best to tell you how this piece made me feel. I was in awe of the
content and impressed with the topic. I related to the piece on a
strange level. In the end, that's what writing is all about, to allow the
reader to relate and understand what is being conveyed. Excellent
writing!!!
This was a well-written poignant poem that really got to the heart of
the matter rather quickly. It did what poems are supposed to do;
to cause us to stop and think and appreciate its message.
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