i really really really really loved this! I love Disciple and they are my most favorite band in the world next to Thousand Foot Krutch! I love the song After the World soooooo much!! amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing!!!!!!!!!!! I would totally love to read a lot more of your work!!
Ooh I was dragged into this story the moment I began reading! I like a good twist at the end and you got one here! I love the descriptive words of the bookseller 'creature.' It was as if he was standing right behind me, describing himself instead of you! You have a very descriptive imagaination. I very much like your writing. I will have to check out more of your pieces as soon as I can! Keep on writing!
I loved this item a lot! It has a really good base line and plot! I couldn't stop reading it! It was like, addicting almost. Your discription words were so well written. I never once got lost or never knew what was happening. You're a good writer! Keep on writing!
This is a great poem. Its filled with so much emotion. It reminded me of the time i had lost my father and the emotional rollercoaster I was on. You are a very good writer!
None of these things have ever happened to me before. I mean, people should be careful about what they do and do not put online. Safety is an issue nowadays because younger kids are now getting into the world of online chatting and what-not. This is a very helpful article! Keep on writing!
Three words. I. Love. This. It is very well written and detailed and it surprised me how...intricate it is. I don't know if that's the right word or not, but it just seems that way. I really like this piece and it shows just how complicated life can be. Keep on writing!
I really liked this piece. I think the short descripyion pulled me in because I am actually a high schooler now and I wanted to read something by another, even though you are not one at this time. It was a really good piece and it reminds me a little of some of my work. Keep on writing!
I liked this item a lot. It had a few rough spots though; like where Fred had been looking for the sound and I just couldn't follow that easily. But overall it was very good. It had a good plot and good characters. Other than that little rough spot I liked it very much! I hope toread more of your work!
This was a very, very beautiful piece and very emotional to me. As I read it, it reminded me of my past and how much I hurt. But it also reminded me of how I looked past all of that and got throught all of it. This is very inspirering and I really hope to read more of your work!
i really like Inuyasha and im glad to see that someone has actually written a piece about what happens after Naraku dies. If you want, take a look at my Inuyasha fanfiction: Sesshomaru and the cat. I'm probably going to change the name sooner or later. I would appreciate it! Thanks!
this was a really good story! it touched my heart and now i'm even MORE afraid of 2012. I know it might not happen, but nobody ever knows what the future holds. I really loved this piece. It made me look at life differently just now, and how much technology has grown. I thikn, if we all joined in, we could make the end of the world not happen. You know what i'm saying?
Haha this riddle was sooo obvious if you knew what Pyrite was. And yay to me because I was just learning about Pyrite in school the other week. This is really good and some friendly advice, the riddle would be more difficult if there were more options. Just trying to help. Keep on writing!
this poem made me giggle a couple times. It is surely funny and I love all the old language terms you used. I loved this poem and I will surely remember it. I wasn't lost throughout the whole thing, and the rhyming get on going and going. Keep on writing!
this poem made me think about how I have JUST fallen for this guy...he already had a girlfriend, but I know he likes me and he knows I like him. This poem is so full of emotion and it will probably give me the confidence to talk to him. (I'm a very shy person when it comes to guys)
this had a very good plot and i love the suspense. I loved the part where everyone is so worked up over one man's death, even though he was a very important figure in his job. There is a good flow and i wasn't lost at the end, i knew exactly what was going on and what all had happened. Keep on writing, i assure you, you could become a good writer one day.
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