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Review of Useful Software  
Review by Hamn8r
Rated: ASR | N/A (Unratable.)
well, some of this stuff is useful, but really, there are many choices
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Review by Hamn8r
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
very good, my friend. can't wait to see what else people can come up with for this story. I sure hope it sparks interest for my story. and for those of you who read this story by fuzzy, please feel free to check out my stories, and add to those as well.
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Review by Hamn8r
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
nice story dude, but I think you should include a 5th option for the first chapter. You don't have to. I'm just spitballing here, but how about adding an option that says "...(four or more ladies) here for you." or something like that. because you know how sometimes when you work hard, you can get what you asked for and more? well I think since your character worked hard, he should get more than what he asked for. but this is your story, not mine. I'm just suggesting, nothing more.
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Review of The Witch Sister  
Review by Hamn8r
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
hello there. this story is pretty good. I'm not sure what I can contribute to this story. but I'm gonna see what I can do.

P.S. if you want, you can take a look at some of my stories, like *yu-gi-oh hypno harem*, 'MC ring', *Reality Journal*, or my newest one, 'Gotta Fuck 'Em All, Eromon!'. it would be great if you could do that, and it would be even better if you would contribute to a couple of them, especially the ones with the stars next to them. Thanks!
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