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Review of Legal Age  
Review by Neverwas
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Seems to be well written to me. Good job
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Review by Neverwas
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well written in my opinion.
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Review by Neverwas
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very well done. I not a fan of the format but you seem to have applied it very well in my opinion.
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Review by Neverwas
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very succinct and to the point. Bravo

It in inspires me to continue on in addition too.

Standing in the dawn of the new ice. Rei Kira Akuma stood, pleased with her efforts to have caused such an end of the old ways and the begining of a new age.
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Review of The Mutant  
Review by Neverwas
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo... very well written.

In response to reading thus inspired the following.

Temptation of orange eyes.

A disembodied rasp of a voice whispers into your ear from behind you.

The towering electric walls the extreme danger signs and all those rules are figments of your minds to keep you from me the oranged eyed monster inside you There are no rules walls or subjugation accept me and there will be no I's only We or Us.
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