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Review by Orlie
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Over all impression: I liked this piece. I could feel a lot of passion in the writing, but in some parts the story flow was interrupted.

Good points: Very good descriptive words and mood of the writing is very deep.

Ideas for improvement: It may help if some wording was changed and the audience was given a better idea of what was happening and why.
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