Well, I will say that I'm not the biggest fan of tentacles which octopie (octopusses? idk) have but the length along with the grammar and detail this story had was quite interesting so while like I said am not the biggest fan of the focus this story had, it was done rather well.
Okay, read the poem and while I can't know what was going through the poet's head while writing this, I personally found it in honest terms, edgy. Nothing against the poem or the poet, but the poem being edgy or dark is quite boring in my opinion as I see a lot of things like poems in the more darker tone.
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