Eden Reborn is a very well written and impressive poem. By utilizing a number of literary devices the poet delineates the calmness of world. Wildness disperses. A joyous tranquility prevails all around the world. The poet has used the free verse style to manifest his ideas.
I always like to read a poem depicting the beauty of nature. Your poem has all the ingredients that convert gloom to glee. The reading of the poem makes me feel that rain drops are kissing me gently, making me drenched completely amidst the drudgery of day to day existence. I go back to the halcyon days of childhood when fishing in the drizzle drops had been a fun sport.
The picture delineates the theme of abounding love in a family, the bonding among the family members. A loveable father under whose caring we are reared up. A sacrificial mother who always spreads her love for her beloved offspring. The tagline is very impressive and thought provoking.
The poem beautifully reflects the theme of enlightenment. Everyone is longing for possessing the mercy, generosity and love. It's our conscience that shows us the right way, lead us to the path of salvation. A stream of consciousness flows through the texture of the poem.
Night falls silently wrapping the surroundings in its black cloak lulling every earthly object to sleep. Secrets remain unraveled. The poet with some delicate touches and images painted a pen picture of the beauty of night. The secrets remain a mystery till dawn breaks with all its aural beauty.
The poem is full of pathos and disgust. It is written in first person narration extricating the dejection of a tender mind who is in desperate search of love and care. But for some unknown reasons they are out of the reach. He pains. He bleeds. He pines for the unattainable. The whole poem is wrapped in the cloak of distressed feelings and anger.
Dinner at the beach or dinner with the loved ones in an unusual manner is always scintillating and exciting. The piece brings out some salient features. First of all, the narrative style is impressive ad it very well delineates the abounding beauty of nature at the beach when night is slowly approaching with its captivating embalmed darkness. As the narrative is coming to an end, the adventurous descriptions of the seagulls and herring with their predatory attacks are mind boggling and hair raising. Amidst all the turmoil and topsy turvy silence falls. The climax rises to its fullest.
The poem beautifully reflects the agony of a person who remains confined in the labyrinthine maze of four walls from where there is no escape, no hope for salvation. This is like an imprisonment that makes a lonely person mad. He longs for liberation but his cravings remain unheard. The poem reveals the painful situation so pathetically that it brings tears to
the eyes of the readers.
A short nature poem with plenty of images that delineate the vast azure blue beauty of the sky. It's wonderful to use images from Greek mythology to convey the theme of the poem. The mythical figure of Icarus is apt to project the love and longing for fly with the clouds. The use of figures of speech to personify the sky is so well knit that the whole poem becomes a nice juxtaposition of symbols and profound thoughts.
Yes friend I agree with what you have said in the small texture of the piece. Charity begins at home- as is said from days auld langsyne. The parents are our friends, philosophers and guide. They prevent us from being entrapped and entangled with the evil companies and propel us to build a bright future ahead of the students.
A short narrative delineates the abounding beauty of natural manifestations. The author walks amidst the bountiful beauty of nature. The woodland path is decked in mesmerizing beauties. The description creates pen picture. The pied beauty of nature is amalgamated with the essence of palatable dishes at home.
The poem beautifully reflects the truth that aspiration becomes anticipation of impending doom- an inscrutable fate. Dreams disperse. Depression engulfs. The colouring of words, the uses of alliterative images are apt to convey the theme of the poem.
A fine example of free verse poem. So curt but the style of writing is really nice and innovative. The uses of words in bold create a dazzle in the eyes of the beholder. The broken lines are made captivating with the uses of adjectives. It is nice experience to read your poem.
The title of poem at first attract the attention of the readers. Very often people as a natural course blame fate for all the drudgery and miseries of life. But knowingly or unknowingly we forget and deny that besides the inscrutable fate there is man himself who can build his own fate with the worn out tools. There lies the futility of struggle for existence. Expectations beget woes. Discard all expectations and do good to others. Only then life will be of worth.
Smile enhances beauty. It's true that smile always clears off all the drudgery but it is equally true that smile doesn't always projects happiness. Sometimes we pretend to be happy by smiling but hide the agony in our hearts. The protagonist of the piece is genuinely happy that is reflected in her mesmerizing innocent beauty that all woes and miseries disperse if one looks at the captivating beauty. The writing style though is simple but really enchanting.
Hello friend, it has always been a fun to read children's poems that takes us back to the good old halcyon days of childhood and infancy. The poem is written in a rhythm like the beatings of drum that gives the baby pleasure. The use of words rat-tat-tat, crash crash crash creates a onomatopoeic effect. The alliterative uses of words buzz with a soft tune. The feelings of loveliness make the poem vivid..
A great example of abecedarious poem. The words perfectly convey the theme. The central idea is sin, repentance, penance and searching way for emancipation. When darkness wraps the existence man becomes desperate for liberation. Prayers, longing for mercy all go to astray. Human beings fall victims of the inscrutable fate from which there is no escape. The thoughts, word choice and the theme all in a combo bear the testimony of a writer's zest.
It had been in fact a lovely feeling always to read a poem depicting the ecstatic moments of childhood. Your poem goves us the same impression of the bygone halcyon days of childhood when we used to laugh for no reason at all, create our own utopian land. It's very much true that we never want to be departed from the jubilant days of our childhood and retain the child inside us.
The poem is about transcending the life confined in the labyrinthine maze. The poet inspires the readers to build a life with the worn out tools. Never stoop to the woes and miseries rather wake
up like a Phoenix and make yourself rise to the highest potential. Only then life will be of worth.
Hi Preet, I have gone through your piece. Variety is the spice of life. A plethora of experience helps one to be accustomed to the modern era of technological innovation and boom. One can easily keep pace with the exuberance
of work. In comparison with the educational system the other sectors engage manpower with the fusion of technology.
A different poem with a different meaning far from the normal genre. The poem makes the readers think more and more. Someone disturbing a lady over the telephone asking irritating questions. A
last it is discovered who the person is. So, she becomes desperate and forbids him to stop bothering her.
An awesome and amazing story with a thrill. A man with a nice attire in a well lit room waiting for the right time to execute the mischief. A perfect ambiance for knitting up the suspense. Atl last after a long waiting he executes the crime. Noe suspected. He left the room as if nothing had happened. Really a nice suspense thriller.
So funny a poem to read and exhilarate in a jubilant mood. Such poem with the exuberance of joyous thoughts makes the readers laugh even though they are in sullen mood. Really weird thoughts to ponder over. The poem is thought provoking and the choice of words are apt as far as the theme is concerned.
What a touchy incident! I am also moved to tears. We are all aware of the fact that the elephants are so intelligent that they are next to human beings. They have the emotional profusion. Lucky are they who are able to get the chance of watching such a phenomena.
The poet here is wrenching the heart for the beloved with whom the poet had a misunderstanding and for which they are now detached. It's a confessional poem that makes one feel the same deprivation through which the poet has to undergo. The way the poet has poured out his emotions is really nice.
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