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Review by Paul789
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the dark mood here, especially the ending!
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Review of Hot and Cold  
Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (5.0)
What lovely writing Jess, very well put indeed. What you are writing about is a 'hot and cold peroson'. It is a difficult situation to be in, i suggest you youtube 'Corey wayne' he has fantastic advice for those situations.
Great work
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Review of Boredom  
Review by Paul789
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Terrific writing, sentences if different lengths really add to the effect. I guess you have been writing for a long while?
Paul
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Review by Paul789
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello, that was great, I really enjoyed your words and especially the last line, a very nice ending. The only line that didn't sing 'for me' was (or whole apples).
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Review of I Wonder How  
Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (4.5)
That was great, I could really feel and smell the scene you set, your language and structures work so well!
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Review of Sister  
Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (4.5)
A beautiful poem
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Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (4.5)
Haha very good, very well wrote indeed!! I thought the last two lines were a little flat, but a great little poem!
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Review of Guardian Angel  
Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, that is a beautiful poem, well done, I enjoyed reading it and the emotion you captured, i wasn't fond of the word 'recovering' i would have prefered a more gentle poetical word, but of course that is just my opinion. Well done.
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Review of Integrity.  
Review by Paul789
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello, an interesting article. I was slightly confused the in the first paragraph, you mention Crosby said 'to the effect of' but then you used quote brackets, so I was unsure if these were his actual words or not.
Well done.
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