This is interesting. I feel as though I am in on a private conversation between you and someone else. I am intrigued by your conversation and want to know more. It makes me want to know what the sequel is. It is good that you can suck people in and make them want more. It is like a tease or a movie trailer that makes you want to see the movie. Good work and keep writing.
I like this. You have your own unique style when you write. It speaks to me and I think it speaks to anyone who has ever been in love or the idea of love or being in love. It's real and true. It's well written and a pleasure to read. It's an important lesson too which is always good. We learn from each other. Good work and keep writing.
I like this poem a lot. It is well written, beautiful, and realistic. It does a good job of expressing how complicated relationships truly are-whether romantic or friendship and some of the blurred lines between them. I appreciate your desire to make peace after loving and fighting since that's a natural part of me too. I can definitely relate to it. Good work and keep writing!
I like this poem. It is sad and true and explains unrequited love very well. I like the way this was written. It's so romantic and sweet. I can relate to it and I enjoyed it. Good work and keep writing.
I like this poem. It is unique and interesting. I like the descriptions of the public transport and people's conversation all around you as you try to listen. I've never thought of that as music but it makes me think. Good work and keep writing.
I love this poem! It is so beautifully written and filled with such visual details. I enjoy the rhyming and all of the ways that you describe the glory of God through the power of nature. It is well written and positive. It is true as well. I have nothing but praise for your wonderful poem. Good work and keep writing!
I love this poem! I love romance and this is the epitome of that. I love the way it rhymes and describes the love between you and your lover so beautifully. It's a feel good happy poem that reminds me of why it's worth it to fall in love. You both sound wonderful and so does your love. Good job and keep writing.
I like this poem. It is short, sweet, and rhymes. It explains the process of writing poetry in a nutshell. I found it enjoyable and descriptive. Good work and keep writing.
I liked this writing. It explains what it can be like after a breakup in a very realistic way. Especially with the fact that it affects both parties involved differently. I feel for you as you struggle to move on while the other moves on more easily and cheer for you once you have moved on too and can be at peace. Good work and keep writing.
I like this poem. It is sad and interesting. It makes me want to know more about the relationship that you had with this man. It's a question that I have thought about as well. What would my funeral look like if I could see it in spirit form? I like the question format too. Asking questions is great in poetry too I think. I like to use questions sometimes too. Good job and keep writing.
This is a powerful, intense poem. It's so descriptive and I could really feel your pain. I can understand that type of loss of love, of your heart. I love the drip, drip quotes and that you don't know for sure until the end what the drip is. Suspense is always good. I enjoyed this and you did a good job with it. Keep writing!
I honestly really enjoyed this poem. I don't have any tips for improvement. I agree with everything that was written as it resonates with my own personal faith. It was written beautifully with wonderful descriptions and comparisons between God's relationship with all people, the author, and how that relationship transcends time. I have nothing but praise for this author. Good work! Keep writing!
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