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Review of a poem about time  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: E | (4.5)
Don't be afraid to break out of the line length-
Making its makr on each
and every day

Those that are mean
Those that are kind

It will give emphasis to these lines as well as create a better flow. I stopped to think which makes more sense/sounds better Making its mark on each day vs. making its mark on every day, or maybe making its mark on each and every day.

Love the rest! Nice job!
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Review of Speechless  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love it. The end makes me smile. Very nice!
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Review by Pink Ink
Rated: E | (3.0)
Ha ha. Haven't we all been there? "Please let it be enough" Thankfully, He knows it all before we even say it. Nice job.
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Review of falling into you  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very good! Makes me feel that "noooo!" feeling that I get when I know I'm in love with someone but my independent, smart woman sense is screaming.
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Review of Chelsea's Poem  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes, that pegs teen love exactly. :) I hope your sister enjoyed it. Well done.
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Review of Wicked Vibe  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
The end is strong, though at the start I was wondering where it was going- then again, maybe that was the point.

The ending gave me chills.
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Review of Let it slip  
Review by Pink Ink
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Been there, done that...LOVE THIS! It summaraizes what you're feeling in that moment.

Nice job! Thanks.
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