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Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: E | (5.0)
An unfinished conversation could change someone's life if finished. I like how you talk about it as a void. One that may never be filled. Your point of view makes me more aware, and I will try to avoid leaving a conversation unfinished.
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Review of Catching Smokey  
Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: E | (4.0)
My kitten bolted past me at night for the first time! Flew past me down the trailer steps, and I was afraid because it was so dark and he is a tuxedo, with a lot of black. I stayed outside, calling and shaking a treat bag. After about 1/2 hour I saw only his white paws prancing around in front of me, and he let me get him.

I can SO relate to the story, and I bet many other pet owners c as n too!
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Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I want more!

You are a huge tease. It's like those season enders where you have to wait months to see what happens.

Very good.
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Review of A New Dawn Ch.1  
Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi!

Let me get something out of the way: it is morning (not mourning) and deities (not deity's.)

I really enjoyed this. Some of the details like the power leaking and the caste system were very interesting.

I became invested in this story, and I want to know what happens next!
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Review of Nosedive No More  
Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have only good things to say about your writing!

I loved the names of the creatures, even the nickname Nosedive. Belfry also cracked me up!

I loved that the whole community showed up for storytime at moonrise.

I was very invested when Basil ran away, and actually gasped!

And, finally, I was very happy when Brlfry finally called him Basil.

Kudos!
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Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is an interesting take on body image problems. There are people who even go so far as to get surgery after surgery, and are still dissatisfied.

Starting with cutting the had off both cracked me up and made me sad because so many people hate their faces.

Very creative and thought-provoking!
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Review of Love is not blind  
Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this! Such beautiful imagery to describe how the blind person "sees" A truly loved one.
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Review by Pinkpaws66
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a beautiful poem. I think the "or is it more than that?" really makes it more thought provoking.
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