This is one of the best poems I ever read in this genre. I Usually don't read poems about love and romance but I just happen to read this and your poem has helped with my romantic enlightment. i honestly perfer rhyming poetry, but you made this appeal to me.
Write On!
This is a very nice poem. I believe this poem. Supposing this poem was directed to me I would cry, but since it isn't I still am going to cry because this poem shows me everything that I don't have.
This poem provoked deep though an may possible change me.
If I wasn't a MAN'S MAN I could have cried.
I also love the picture, Ironicly i pictured it before it loaded on my screen. That a crystal sigh of a good writer!
Hi!
This poem isn't bad. It does have a nice flow, but I felt that you abandoned your rhyme scheme in the middle and that kind of threw me off. I also think that you overused the word "she". After the first couple of lines I don't think that you should maintain unpatterned repition.
Overall a good poem!
Your love,
The Prince
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