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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story made me laugh. It took me back to my own childhood memories.
Both my mom and grandmother suffered from bouts of depression. I remember the good times only.

You are a very talented writer. Your grammar and punctuation are tight and I can find nothing negative to say about this article.

Keep up the great writing!
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your poem flows. It is cohesive and carries the reader through the stages of hope and new love.

It is never easy to critique a fellow poet. We think and march to a different drummer than most writers. You have a talent for making your words weave down the page, capturing raw emotions from the reader, as they are forced to think.
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love your analogy between whiplash and a broken heart. Your verses flow and you have talent....keep writing and you will always have readers!

It is an art form, when a writer is able to convey his thoughts through indirect words.

I tried to find something to critique....but I really think this article stands firm the way it is.
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (4.5)
I started this review with some hesitation when I read that it was a book chapter in verse form. I admit I am pleasantly surprised!

Your verses flow and the content made me want to read more. I will now go and read the previous chapters. Thanks for posting such an interesting read!
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What a delightful read!! This poem was a surprising departure from the norm. What a clever piece of writing. I found myself smiling from start to finish. If the nightly news was presented half a clever as in your poem, I would tune in every evening.

Thank you for putting a smile on my face and introducing me to such a wonderful form of poetry.
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (3.5)
Your poem certainly took me down my own rocky friendship road. This poem flows from emotion to emotion and captures the jealousies inside a friendship that can sometime destroy it.

There are a few awkward verses, but they do not detract from the overall intent of your poem. Keep up the good work. You have talent!
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: E | (3.0)
This poem brings back memories of many walks in the forest. You have talent, keep up the good work!
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Review by Jessie May
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Absolutely beautiful poem. Your words evoke images that match the title of your writing. It is apparent that the empty plains could be the loneliness inside each one of us. Your poem touched me. Your writing style is very reader friendly.

Keep on writing and I will keep on reading your work!
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