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Review of What You Wish For  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Marcus , the bad man, portrayed very aptly in this piece of work. He has already possessed two masks and is on a mission to have the third one from the auction. He wins the auction, and he is now the owner of The God of War, besides Anarchy and Chaos. But as the name goes, The God of War, declares war on Marcus and he is englufed in his vault. Bad ending to a Bad man. Nice lesson to be learnt from this is , if you run nehind becoming a bad ruler, the deeds themselves will kill you.
Nice read for this morning
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thats exactly what happens if Charlie Brown's Mother was anyone WDC mentor. It would be usually a monologue with some sylablle as a response to the talk. The writer is trying to clear some doubt about how he has to write a poem. Whether it should have a rhyme and rythm, which figure of speech he is supposed to use and things like that. But the only response he gets is waaaaaa wawawa.. and amazingly funny, he presumes most of things and thanks the mentor as well.
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Review of Busted  
Rated: E | (4.5)
very funny piece of read. This actually shows how every typical husband is when he is angry. Always a soft spoken person, Mitch displayed a funny behaviour as per the writer. But the rage was true as he was hand-cuffed for a small reason. When they get into the bed, the writer is so sleepy that she over-heard him most of the times. Only when he said THREE TICKETS did she jolt back to verify her knowledge of two tickets.
The best line " he had the deer in the headlight look"...
Very funny and a nice read
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Review of The Review Game  
Rated: E | (4.0)
A wife and a Husband, if they enter the same profession, then its a real music. Mitch did not want to enter into writing, as he knew for himself that he was good if he was to review the stuff. But he entered into writing just for his wife's coaxes. Now it was his wife's turn to review Mitch's work. She found it to be difficult to review honestly and at the same time not hurting Mitch's feelings. But she was frank enough to admit towards the end when asked whether it was something she hated. But Mitch got his answer very well.Nice read.
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Review of The Holidays  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Oh my god. This turned out to be a completely hilarious disaster.The best part is in madlib is that, whatever form of information we try to provide, is always different from what it is thought of to be. I mean how can they eat cow , baked bird, mashed trees for dinner? hahaha thats very funny.
But again, this is the best way to learn "formation of a sensible sentence.
Good work folks.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
madlibs have always made a very funny story out of my details provided. Jokes apart, this is one of the best ways to know when to use which part of speech in a sentence forming exercise. Very useful piece of exercise for one an all here at writing.com.
However, if more information is given on the input information, the madlibs would turn out to be one of the favourites here on WDC>
Good Job

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice and an apt answer to the young user, who feels dejected and ignored. But he is wrong.
Even my upgraded membership is going to expire on 15th april 2010 at noon, but I am still not feeling about about it. Even when my membership will expire, I will keep writing on WDC. Thats for sure. This site offers great insight anf outlook as well.
Kudos to WDC.

 
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