This is like the third time I've said this today, but the Lord words in mysterious ways. This is a message that I have been trying to continue to repeat to myself on a daily basis. I hope that your journey for peace continues down a loving path. I will say a prayer tonight that it is a serene path.
Though in essence this is all that is important, some do not care to live, but just to have a life and that is why they do all of the things that aren't important per your writing. And some think that the things that they are doing are of the most importance to their lives. But who are we to say what should and shouldn't be important to anyone.
Though this isn't very descriptive in regards to the aftermath of the mess from the port-a-potties. I can see how this looks and smell it and now want to regurgitate my lunch and breakfast. So I'd say this is a five out of five for the imagery level. Keep up the good work!
This is sooo fitting for the generation of today. And they way they we all interact with one another and love, be it real or fake, one another. I wish that this was today's truth but unfortunately it is and you were able to put into such eloquent words. Keep up the great work!
This piece is beautiful, it made my heart swoon and kept a huge smile on my face the entire time I was reading it. This is one way to make a girl in high school's Valentines Day special! Especially, if she isn't materialistic or showy as some females or even males can be.
This piece makes you do just what the title says, WONDER. Not only about what it speaks on, but everything else in between. However, the final line seems so permanent. It makes me not want to answer any of the questions at the same time. That is not a bad thing, by the way.
This went from good to bad fast. Nonetheless, it was beautiful. I am sorry that you were ruined by this person. But am grateful that you were able to put it in to words to be loved and admired by others. This shows that you are strong, in my opinion and you will have better times and days. Keep loving. keep writing.
This was rather eloquently put. And I agree with your opinion. Some times it's not how you do what you do it's why. And that is where what goes on in your mind comes to play. Sometimes knowing just how it all works isn't enough for the works of art that are created.
I LOVE this piece, it is not only beautifully put. It conveys are certain feeling as it is being read. And not all poems have that capability. If you don't mind I would love to show this to my Lover. It speaks the words that I would love for them to understand that I have been trying to explain to them.
I know that God is your muse, but I'd like to know what brought about this piece?
This is beautifully put in to words, He as your inspiration. As I read this I appreciated and feel blessed to be gifted with the talent of being able to read and write literature.
I felt dumb founded at the end. I'm picturing it in my end that this guy works in an office or something. And wondering how and why have they asked him so many questions in an office job for him to want to quit this badly. But the end, makes it all make so much sense. Great read by the way! Keep it up.
This is a beautiful piece! I got a little teary-eyes. This is what an eternal lover/partner is. This is what a marriage is. As I read this it made me think of my husband and the future that I see us having together and even most of the moments that we share now.
This was a very adorable read! I believe that all that have worked in an office of some sort would enjoy this. And those that love cats would agree with you in regards to Lucky's response to his evaluation. Now this makes me think of how people would evaluate any and all of their pets.
If I could give you more starts I would. I love to read and write erotica, not just because it's naughty. There's just this skill that is needed to write it. And this mixed both erotica and Vampires. so I'm over the top excited about it. And if you don't mind me saying I did feel the naughty part of it too.
This is a beautiful piece. The flow was a little choppy when reading, but still nice. I am sorry for the your loss especially in such a short amount of time. It is never easy to deal with. However, writing does help with the pain. And your work, to me, is evidence if that.
This is a beautiful piece. It reminds me a lot of the last few weeks before my step father passed away from cancer. I hated seeing him go through all of that pain. However, everyday he made sure that he showed my mom, my siblings, and my daughter that he loved us. Especially, my mom.
May I ask what insisted you to write this? Like what was your muse?
Though I do like it and agree with most of it, it makes me think of the things we are currently going through in the world. Such as the fires, hurricanes, and earthquakes. I want to be ready when he comes, but I'm also praying he doesn't come in my life time.
This is the loading bar of life that some people don't seem to understand. I like how you eloquently weaved the words together to explain it so that some may agree and some may learn what it is that they never knew. The flow is soft, kinda like a cloud. Keep up the good work.
This piece is faced paced and fun to read as stated. My favorite line would have to be the very last. It is rather unexpected, though it does fit in perfectly with the rest. This piece has a great pattern and flow to it where when you began reading it, you don't want to stop until you get to the end.
This Haiku, though only three lines long, literally sums up spring and that it has to offer. I would just like to know what made you choose the last line? Of all things about spring, what made you think about births? Are you a spring baby or mother of one?
This is how I felt about my bestfriend for a good while. So I completely understand from my perspective while reading this. Sometimes the ones who we thought would always be there are the main ones who won't. Life is constantly moving for us all, and some happen to go in different directions. But the sun will still come in the morning. Sometimes you have to forget them and remember you.
This is a perfect way to look at everyday as a new day, a new beginning. Most people can't or maybe even won't look at a new day in the same light as you. I hope you don't mind, but I will put this piece of beautiful work in my motivational journal (it's a personal journal). I am currently on this new journey of enjoy everything about me and being happy for just being, and this does that.
As I read this poem, it made me think of a special someone that I have in my life. I'm not sure if you meant this in a romantic nature. But that's how I perceived it. It is a great piece!
I liked the journey through the various interactions. I like how Jake forgot his name and memory, and that Alex and Max had to remind him. And his first inkling was because they were yelling his name at him. I had the opportunity to write another chapter, but I'd prefer to continue to read that of others. Good job!
As I read this it made me think of the smell of the paper as I imagined each and every story I read. How crisp each page once was and no longer is.
This piece has amazing imagery. Not to mention, how it is displayed with the brown print centered on the page.
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