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Review of God's Reject  
Review by Abe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
dear L S,

Your poem 'God's reject'

It is nicely written like a good thriller,

I like it.


Abe
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Review of What we have.  
Review by Abe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
dear Solidus,

Yr poem 'what we have'


As always u write simple but nice poems!


Abe
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Review of Love?  
Review by Abe
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
dear Solidus,

Your poem 'love'

It is a good poem.

written by your experiences in life?


Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear MaryMiller,

Yr poem'Perfect Morning'

It is a good poem but a little dark!


I like it,


Abe
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Review of Anger  
Review by Abe
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
dear Solidus,

Yr poem 'anger'

yes, it describes anger very well!



Abe
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Review of Isolation  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Leaf Soto,

Yr poem 'Isolation'

Yes it is a good emotional poem.

But u have repeated some sentences non stop

anyway it is good


Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Keaton Foster,

Your poem 'all that she intends'

The first person in the poem wants to end a relationship with his lover?
The death is described in a most horrible ways!
There seem to be a clash of ideas between the two lovers.
The final solution for his problem is death?


Abe
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Review of At The Sea  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Keaton Foster,

Your poem 'at the sea'

As always you have a different style of writing.
It is like the writer is atoning for his sins by way of washing at the sea.
The first person in the poem has been fighting to do the just and nothing but the just.
It is complicated, your writing, but I like the style .

Abe
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Review of Living In Excess  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Keaton Foster,

I have read your poem 'living in excess' and like to make a review about it.

actually what is 'a mountain of a mess'? you keep telling about it in your poem.Yes, it tells about a life not normal by any standards but where is it? A prison, maybe?


Abe
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Review of My Love  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Nalthur,

yr poem 'my love'

It is a good poem of undeclared love.

I like it


Abe
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Review of Broken  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear timeless,

yr poem ' broken'

It is a very sad poem about a broken relationship.

& very emotionally written

I like it ,


Abe
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Review of Passion  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dea TLF,

Your poem ;passion'

Yes it is very emotional indeed!.as you sad passion is our peace and it never leaves the soul in the end, that is death!You write in simple language and that is what caught my eye.Some poems are very difficult to read and understand but not yours.
keep it up,


Abe
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Review of My True Feelings  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear R N P,

yr poem 'my true fe....'

Yes, the romance of u & the other is nicely described there!



Abe
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Review of Silent Screams  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear V G,

Your poem 'silent screams'

It is very emotional and a good one!



Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear MBR,

Your poem 'joy in the....'

It is a brief yet a good piece of emotional content

I like it.

Abe
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Review of Don't Show Ego  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Sukhbir,

Yr poem "ego"

It is a short but very inspirational prose!

a good one

I like it

Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear SB,
yr poem "A poem..."

it is a good poem, anyway how old is she, yr daughter?


Abe
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Review of #givingTuesday  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear D E D,
yr article "giving tuesday"

it is an eye opener on MS
beautifully & painfully written



Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear JWR,
yr poem "when u r..."

it is a good poem!
it describes the human mind, the greediness, fear etc.. well

but u have almost duplicated the chapters 1 & 4!

anyway I liked reading it

Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear AR,

Yr article "the day...."

it is a very good article of life's experience



Abe
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Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear WSH,

yr poem "much more..."

it is a lovely poem


Abe
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Review of 360 Degrees  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear denatured,

yr poem "360..."

IT IS AN UNUSUAL POEM

but a good one,


Abe
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Review of Singed Feathers  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear DS,

yr poem"signed feathers"


yes, it is very philosophical!

I liked it

could u make longer lines shorter, & it will help to read the poem well?



Abe
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Review of Me without you.  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear AR,

yr poem "me without u"

it is a good prose, rather than a poem.



Abe
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Review of Buddy  
Review by Abe
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear LE,

yr poem " buddy'

yes it is a sad poem with love


I like it


Abe
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