Johns love for Holly was very well presented, and appreciated! I cried in this story! I loved it! I like how you kind of made everbody think she was gone already, by having the family come over to the house, and having john walk through the house remembering her. I cheered when he found her in the flower bed! She is a survivor! I am glad you chose that way to go! Great work!
AMAZING POEM! I loved it! The energy of survival in it was breath-taking! It made me cheer all the way to the end! You walk, I will walk, everyone needs to walk for a cure! You poem inspired me to do just that! Great Work! This was an extremely well written poem!
This was emotional and charged with negative energy towards breast cancer, or any cancer for that mater. I loved reading this, it was sad, and filled with sorrow. It shows how cancer eats at the core. It was breath-taking, and eye opening. Great Work.
This was incredible! I felt the emotion in this as I read it! The last part of the story sent a pang to my heart! It was sad but powerful. I like how she still has hope for survival from this evil diesease of breast cancer. She is sitting by the window feeling like a little child. This was very good.
I could almost see the fight to survive in this poem! I loved it! It was very poetic and emotional and it struck a beat no one can ignore. I thought it was written beautifully and it holds a lot of truth. Great work on writing this! Breast cancer is a nasty disease on which a cure needs to be found. Join the fight.
I'm not going to give you a bad rating because I disagree with what you wrote, I believe you did a good Job in writing what was on your mind.
I do disagree, Who are you to decide what is sin and what isn't? Everybody sins every single day and hour of their life.... some without even knowing it! Here is the most basic bible verse in the bible
John 3:16
For God so loved the world that he gave his only forgoten son, that whosoever believes in him should have everlasting life.
To me this means whosoever believed that God sent his son to die on the cross for our sins,and accepts him into their heart will have everlasting life!! So that we did not have to be perfect. We can always ask God for forgiveness that is one of Gods precious gifts! Without it we would all go to hell.
The verse does not say, "whoesoever believes in him and is without sin, should have everlasting life."
I know a lot of people run with this and they chose to live life as a hypocrite, But that is up to God to judge them, not you. Nobody in this world lives without sin, we overcome it and we fight it. Our sins is what caused Jesus to die on that cross. Otherwise he did it for nothing. What about the man beside Jesus when he was on the cross. Jesus gave him forgiveness, and told him that he would be with him in eternity. I think we all get forgiveness everyday! Think about this. God never lets go of us, we let go of him sometimes, but he never lets go of us. I'm not saying that it is ok to sin, Sin does poison us and God does punish us, but he never leaves us over it. He loves us too much. I know I am saved from the peace I feel in my heart. Please don't make people doubt their salvation. That is what the devil does.
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