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Review of The Musician  
Review by Karma
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I find myself confused on the setting, is it the end of the world? Where is everyone? Why radiation, what happened before hand?
There is a good line here, and I love you word choice for the piece.


-Karma.
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Review of Deadly love  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oooooohhhhh. Very good. I could feel this poem.

I love the last stanza
"Like a reapers kiss
You set my soul on fire
Your my darkest wish
My forbidden desire."

Very well written and very well worded. Lines flow together which is great.

Keep writing.

-Karma
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Review of White Water Life  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice, your lines flow smoothly and the line: The challenges; aren’t black or white but shades of gray, really speaks to me. Very well done. Keep up the good work.


-Karma.
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Review by Karma
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really nice, I didn't feel like the lines were forced and they flowed very well. My favorite line is: We softly swayed, a last embrace; a gentle touch upon the face. Keep up the good work. :)


-Karma.
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Review of Artists  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really really enjoyed this. I could actually picture a female screamo singer singing this for a good. Really good I love how you compare the person to an artist. I have a lot of respect for this poem. Keep up the good work. :)

-Karma.
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Review by Karma
Rated: E | (4.5)
Fail on my behalf.. I thought I could remember more. Lol but it was fun.*Heart*


-Karma.
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Review of Nightlight  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really really like this poem. It sort of caught me by the title. I also love how you use to words. I can also feel so sad :( I love it.*Heart*

-Karma.
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Review by Karma
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very good however I found it slightly confusing... It states that Patty was dead at the end; however, at the beginning it was all about Patty and her children... Was her diary a lie? Or maybe it was just a little confusing on the whole thing. I liked it however. Very nice.

-Karma.
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Review of You're not there  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (3.5)
Sounds like to me that this could be written as a song. Very good, you leave the reader curious about why she wants him not to be there or the other way around. I really like this. Keep up the good work. :)


-Karma.
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Review of On This Path  
Review by Karma
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like how it flows at some parts, yet it doesn't completely grasp me. I felt lost in some parts of this poem. I also feel you were trying to make the lines rhyme... I'll be sure to read more. :)

-Karma.
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Review by Karma
Rated: E | (3.5)
I really like this poem. I think it is a good comprehension of how people feel when they feel as others are "out of their league." Very nice, I would love to see more. :)
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