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Review by Kyle Giroux
Rated: E | (5.0)
It took me a few reads, but I love this poem. The imagery is amazing and it's beautiful in a very chaotic, slightly disturbing way.

"babies die too.
our generation is afraid of itself,
of its collective POWER.
the last breath before death, I wonder if it hurts?
red and blue baby.
wrinkly soft baby gerbil fetus.
authors die softly."

"I recite them poetry and they listen; they become me and I'm happy forever."

I can't get these out of my damn mind, they've been stuck since I read it.

Easiest (and only, I think) 5 I've ever given.
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Review of Zombie Story  
Review by Kyle Giroux
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I've always wondered what would happen if a schizo survived a zombie holocaust and ran into a giant deer named Bambi, and now I know. Very entertaining and witty. Certainly not what I was expecting when I read the title. A few errors, nothing too bad. Notably the 'your' in the seventh paragraph. Otherwise, a good read and I look forward to the sequels.
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