A very well written and description of one person in our lives. This depicts the ordinary little person and the impact on the world around him that he had. Too many feel sorry for themselves but people like this make our lives so much better.
I read through this very smoothly and was kept interesed throughout. I felt a lot of emotion in this.
I enjoyed this piece a lot.
As with everyone I am always looking for a place to post and get recognized. This site is done well. Everything you need to find any style or genre can be found here and an opportinity to gain points. It is nice to have a one stop place to shop.
I liked this very much. You write extremely well and get the subject matter across. You describe things well. I felt I was there. I read through this smoothly, without stumbling and was kept interested throughout. I hope to read more of your work. Keep up the good work.
I really enjoyed this. It was a bit sad but realistic in showing change. Finding beauty in the long lost beautiful world she once knew is a nice touch. As we age we learn to find beauty whenever and wherever we want. Keep up the good work! Take Care.
I felt a lot of emotion behind this. I visualized scenes and episodes as I read through this. I got a sense of the absurdity of our media. I don't know if you intended this. This was an emotional time for us and you have brought some of it to light again. I enjoyed this and will be back.
I found I got a very quick response here and my confusion was put to rest. Thanks for the posting place for those lost and confused. It does get frustrating trying to find out some things sometimes. I should have come here when I started to find out how to get the premium. I might have enjoyed using that.
This is a very moving piece. I read through this without stumbling and felt a bit humbled. Melancholic and honest with our inner feelings and thoughts. I enjoyed this. The emotion is strongly felt. It put me in a solemn mood. Thanks again. I will be back,
Our Patriot Act is anything but that. Now when anyone goes into an airport their picture is taken and on record. They profile faces from the upper lip to the brow. We are losing our freedoms slowly but surely and this sad story of yours shows how it is starting.
A few months before Yusuf made the headlines I was wondering what happened to Cat Stevens. You have gone into great detail about this man and someone that was a part of a lot of lives.
I fully appreciated this story without reading "A Temporary Matter". You brought out the charactor very well. I felt her thoughts and emotions. I was caught up with her (being her) and felt with her. I enjoy your writing and will be back. Thanks for the good read.
I felt a lot of emotion in this. You have written it in a paragraph and in doing this you have lost a lot of the power that it could have if it was written in some poetic format. I liked this and felt the passion and hope that you wanted to express.
There was a lot of emotion here and I felt it. I read through this without stumbling. I like the way you have described the different ways we see ourselves. This is the first time I have visited your port but not the last. I enjoyed this very much.
Take care and thanks.
I appreciate the time and effort taken to post this. So far I have done well in my reviewing, according to this. I have found that many members and unique members will not spend the time to review or rate and I find this sad. I want criticism as well as most that come here. It gives us the opportunity to improve. Thank You for this posting. Perhaps some of the old timers here should review this and be reminded.
This was fun. The humor and wit you used to throw this together and then blame most of it on Faulkner. That is my interpretation only. I enjoyed this and you did entertain me. Thanks.
I enjoyed the sentiment here. This is a reminder that children are a gift from above. I read through this very smoothely and was kept interested. You related the pain and emotion very well. I enjoyed this without getting bored. I will be back to read more from your port.
The story was interesting and kept me interested till the end. I flowed through it easily without stumbling over anything. This was good and I think if you keep writing you will get much better. Nice job and good luck. I will be back to read more I hope.
I love this. It sums up about everything. It put a smile on my face. It was short simple reading. LOL
More philosophy of life needs to be generated in this fashion. Nice job. I will come back and read more of your items. You have interested me. Thanks!
Even this is emotional. Perhaps an inspirational aspect many could use when they sit to write and come up blank. Many try hard but you explain here that write what you feel at that moment the words will come.
I am always happy to visit your site.
I am not a science fiction buff but I found this interesting and entertaining. It kept me interested and the dialod was excellent. I will be back to read more of your writing and I hope to learn to write fiction as well as you. Thanks for the story. Take care and keep it up.
I gave you a three because you are so enthusiastic. You do phrase your descriptions with humor and that keeps the reader interested.
I will list some spelling errors for you: Country not Contry - 36,000 not 3,6000 - modern not morden - --"101 building" is on there should read - 101 foot building is there (no apostrophies)- Most of young people - should read most of the young - tastings should be tastes - many interesting thing to should be things -
Do not get discouraged. The way you think will make you a successful writer. We all make mistakes. The only way to get better is to write every day and learn.
Two things every writer needs: 1. A Websters Dictionary and 2. A Roget's Thesaurus
You do not need a big and fancy book. You can pick up used paperback versions that serve the purpose as well as big new ones. The cost is minimal but the advantage is enormous.
Good Luck. Keep writing. I hope to read more of you stuff soon. Visit my port and read a few.
I will rate a five to anyone or any group that steps up and goes out of thier way to help others. For the newbie to offered so much support is to be recognized.
Keep up the fantactic work and, hopefully, once I settle in here well I will help support you.
Although I am really not qualified to judge poetry I let the emotion I feel judge it for me. This shows the dislike of the womans situation and the foresight to see change coming. She despises her situation but knows it is only temporary. I liked this poem and felt the emotion.
This is written very well. It kept me interested from the start. The plot as well as the dialog are done exceptionally. Everything was easy to understand. I enjoyed the sublime humor. Good luck on your endeavors you are talented. I look forward to reading more from your post.
I always strive to learn something new each day. You have taught todays lesson to me. Poetry is not a strong point in my writing and my attempts have not brought any reviews, as yet. Your instructions and explanations are excellent in this How To piece. I will put this form into something soon.
You have captured the sentiments of many here. Do peple really think that if she does snap out of it she will be happy or any better off. She is going to a better way and life if she isn't there already. We can keep a body going for a long time after the brain and soul have left. I enjoyed the sentiment here.
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