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Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfectly clear, helpful and concise. Thank you
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Review of The Story of Life  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.5)
Enjoyed everything about this short, but powerful and highly descriptive piece. Attention to detail was great. The essence of this piece was interestingly portrayed and cleverly communicated.

Captured my interest from start and especially appreciated the conclusion.

Polished and with a style of writing that works for me! Thank you. Please continue to write more!
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Review of Red Love  
Review by equalchance
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very polished and very well executed. I really enjoyed the pace, format and imagery you generated.

You write like an accomplished and very experienced already!

Thank you.
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Review of Wanting You  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (3.5)
I think that so many people will be able to relate to this. Honest and insightful. Enjoyed. Thank you.
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Review of Fishing With Dad  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.5)
Slick and smooth.Clear and well expressed. Loved the hints at how childhood excitement can take us in different moods. Really liked the ease and affection betwen siblings and Father. Brought a smile to my face of what an ideal day out should be with families - but is so often not the case. Love to see this piece expanded. Thank you.
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Review of In the Rain  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.0)
Easy syle and fluid flow. Does make the reader explore the reasons for the embrace in the rain. You obviously have a good observational eye and observer of people. Romantic streak? Thankyou.
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Review of Open Skies  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.5)
Lovely flow and format. Great analogy with the great man without being over sentimental. Powerful images.
His roots are certainly still buried in many souls. He certainly did have chips and nudges, but still lives on. Really enjoyed this tribute. Thank you.
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Review of emptiness  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes I agree, we are all searching for that inner fulfillment in all the wrong places. Buddhists would have a very different take on your interpretation of emptiness. Current and relevant theme in our contemporary society. Enjoyed - thank you.
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Review of stress  
Review by equalchance
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Enjoyed, please expand on this. I am sure alot of readers would be able to relate to this theme and empathise. Nice movement and pace. Thank you
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Review of Going Home  
Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really do enjoy your work. It certainly works for me. It feels like you are an accomplished writer already? The depth and strength of your writing is inspiring. Sophisticated, intelligent and I wish I could communicate so effectively as you do. Poetry is not generally my bag - but this could turn me. Please continue writing. It is amongst the best quality I have come across in this site. Thank you for asking my very humble opinion.
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Review by equalchance
Rated: E | (4.0)
Enjoyed. Powerful and communicated clearly the edge of desperation in situations like this. Nice flow and format.
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