Hey You have written a nice poem but why the person is regretting and saying himself a weed. Well, It's very difficult for anyone to express himself as weed and not as Rose but you can write something very beautiful to express yourself as God has given you a great skill to write which proves that you are not weed but a shining Rose :).
The beginning of the story is really very nice. Its heart touching when that guy found a quarter and he thought it is the same quarter that he lost when he was young but the end could be better. As per me you should also write that he fulfilled his promise to donate that to charity.
The story is nice but people took that light bulb in a wrong way. Actually the bulb which all were consider as Holy, it signifies God as God is a point of light. So, people think that if they touch that Holy bulb They will definitely get serenity in the arms of God Almighty. They will get light and might from that Bulb but that bulb was just a symbol that signifies God.....You can write it with more deapth.
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