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Review by R.C.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
my first reaction was "MORE MORE WHERE IS THE REST OF IT?".

Grammar is nice, and no mistakes could be found.

The storyline is great. i hope this is a series and not a stand alone, ecasue thta would be dissapointing. i would love to see what happened to the boy/wolf/werewolf.

5/5
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Review by R.C.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is beautiful. it begins with the chareter in his dull, repetitive day doing nothing but the same thing. then the lady comes into play, and in the end she changes his outlook.

The grammar was neat and no errors could be found.

the message was clear, about how a simple thing can change someones outlook. it nearly made me cry.

5/5
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Review of How can this be?  
Review by R.C.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I loved this! morning musings are always so fun to write down, and more interesting to read.

The grammar was good, and I like the rhymes. no suggestions.

I love the contrasts you make. Taken or stolen, built up or felled, all great examples of the choices we have.

5/5
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Review by R.C.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this is great. the metaphors, the setup, all of it.

i couldn't find any grammar mistakes, but thats beside the point.

this is amazing in so many ways. the description of how he made you feel, the way you said you forgot who you really were, and the ending especially was moving.
5/5
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Review of Lurking Raven  
Review by R.C.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is spell bounding. Truthfully I half wonder if you actually know what it’s like to die, and one day decided to write about it in a poem.

No grammar mistakes and this seems to be very well polished.

I don’t have any suggestions for you on improvement, but i do ask that you write more like this.

5/5
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Review of Silent Rain  
Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a great poem. of course, i would rather someone not have to write a poem about them being depressed because depression sucks (i know first hand). i like how you, or whoever this is anyway, cant remember what you were doing before you sorta woke up. and the part where you remember everything was deep. then, at the end when you say your heart died with her, that was pure poetry at its finest, because its pure truth. 5/5
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Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great! a few spelling problems, but of course this is only the first few chapters.

I love how the people are so life like, and your idiot PhD is hilarious. the plot is great, and i hope it will continue to be this good. i hope you don't stop, and that your stranger gets killed at some point
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Review of BUTTERFLY WINGS  
Review by R.C.
In affiliation with Dream Team HQ  
Rated: E | (4.5)
aww, butterfly's! this is good though,like saying butterfly's are the answer to word peace. no mistakes found and nice imagery, so all in all keep it up
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Review of My Surprise  
Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
aww, i think im gonna cry. i wanted someone there for my "reveal" but i was so secluded within myself that no one even knew. it might not have taken three tries if i had my friend to back me up. i bet mom was "surprised" enough. anyway, thanks for the great read!
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Review by R.C.
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I always enjoy a story with a good dose of crazy. 5 stars for the crazy, and the lack of any findable mistakes. have you ever been in one of those places? i haven't, but Ive read about them. used to get called crazy all the time, so i researched them. i never believed i would go to any myself, talking to people who arnt there isn't crazy, right?
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Review by R.C.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I don't really want to review this, its too close to my heart, but i feel i have too, for the people ive lost. my grandma? she had colon cancer. she died at about 97. but she was so strong before it took her, she didnt even need anyone around to help her. my uncle? only just 40, brain tumor. he died on my nana's couch, and the sad part is, he wasn't even related to us, and we did what his family couldn't. my mom is being checked out right now, we dont know yet. im proud of those people, and im glad to hear that its possible to overcome.
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Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
yes, it may be cured, but sometimes you can still feel the scar
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Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Maybe it was a luck overload? The 5 was as much for the lack of mistakes I could find as it was for the great story.
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Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
don't get me wrong, this was good. its just the way it seems to move, too quickly. you seem to jump from one place to another. would really be great after that though, so keep writing!
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Review by R.C.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
the beach was totally the best one, but all were exceptional
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Review of Never Far Away  
Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
sad... so so sad
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Review by R.C.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
oh man that was so awesome, really it was. he nic little twist at the end and the hanger you leave, its truly a great piece.
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Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)

The heart wants what the heart wants.
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Review of Imperfect  
Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
i now how you feel. really i do
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Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
i pray that all of these arnt life experiences. i know i couldn't stand to see a woman i loved doing the same to another man. loveing him the way she used to love me. the way she would leave me in the dust. i cant write anymore, these just seem so sad
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Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not here for the points so i will keep this short, you write great love poems. even when it is the ending of love these are fantastic.
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Review of Lack of love  
Review by R.C.
Rated: E | (5.0)
i love this, a truly lovely poem. 5/5
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Review of The Fog  
Review by R.C.
Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
Hard to read and full of grammar mistakes. A great try but it just read weird, i really cant explain. Anyway practice makes perfect so don't stop trying
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