I enjoyed this poem it made me feel like it was a very personal piece about your relationship with your Mother. I could picture you standing in a cemetery talking to your Mother trying to release many years of feelings. I to had a difficult relationship with my own Mother but I will always love Her and always miss Her. Keep up the good work and keep writing.
This is a very informative and enlightening article. Other than a couple punctuation errors
very well written. I think mules are underappreciated, they have faithfully served Mankind
for many years, and will continue to do so for many years to come. Keep up the great work!
Not bad a few spelling and punctuation errors but thats always my weak area so I have to check and re- check my work. I dont agree with all of your statements, but I respect your right to express your beliefs and opinions. I think you could continue with this it could be a few more pages long maybe more. But I do agree we are all so empathetic we we are like sheep. so busy with our lives we do nothing to make change. keep up the good work.
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