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#3786756

Review of Rollar coaster ride

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Well that certainly was a roller coaster ride of a poem, and I mean that in a good way. I felt a strong voice coming through, and the rhyme scheme was masked by the written structure of the piece. It was certainly a good poem, and if it was heartfelt, then I suppose that I have no complaints. Keep it up!

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#3786755

Review of Holidays Are A Battlefield

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

That was quite interesting, and not at all what I was expecting when I set out to read about the holidays. Well done.

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#3786634

Review of One Too Many Chapter One

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Wow. That was a very well written story. I am impressed by both the depth and the development of plot that this piece exhibits, and I don't say that very often. If this is an indication of what is soon to come, I can honestly say that I can not wait for more.

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#3786632

Review of Templars Revenge--Chapter 3

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I was very interested to read this item as well. It had a much stronger ending than the previous chapter, and even if I hadn't read the others, this once encouraged me to both continue with the story and do a little digging in order to see exactly where it started. very nice.

5

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#3786504

Review of human reptile

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Rated: 13+

| (2.0)

If this was a story, it was very odd. If it was satire, it went over my head. If it was your honest opinion, I'm afraid that I disagree entirely.

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#3786489

Review of Brush Strokes

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This told a story better than any other poem of this length that I have ever read. Great work.

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#3786476

Review of Dr. Seuss allusion poem

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Rated: ASR

| (3.0)

The rhyme scheme was inconsistent and the message of the poem was a tad convoluted, and it feels like this could be split and made into two very good poems.

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#3786474

Review of Templars Revenge--Chapter 2

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Rated: ASR

| (3.5)

Having not read the first installment of this story, I can't help but feel that I am missing something, and that perhaps the story would be a faster read if I had completed Chapter 1. However, standing alone, this was a descriptive piece that moved well and developed suspense, although some of the sentences were hard to read and were bogged down by confusing pronoun usage.

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#3786471

Review of Tails Got Gas

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Rated: E

| (1.0)

Well, I don't know what I expected.

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#3786469

Review of Roots and Wings

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

A bit choppy at first, the complex descriptions, while setting the scene very well, take away from the progress of the story. The ending was also a bit abrupt, but otherwise, a very good story.