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Erotica,free flow poetry
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Review of Worm Meets Apple  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The authors job is to record his observation. Let the reader come to whatever conclusion he wants to. Why are you worried? Additionally if you want, you can always write another piece in detail and then link up the two. If new conclusions emerge let them. About the poem, it is nice one. On its own, it is thought provoking even without your clarifications. In fact, if you remove clarifications, it might help the reader to think more creatively. Why bind the creativity?


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Review of Upside Down  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Where have I heard about elfs? Oh. Yes. Harry Potter series. You have both good and bad pointed out in my review. Let us start with bad first. There is not much of a story although I can sense your ability with imagination. Please take this as positive and build up on that strength. Good thing which is much..much more valuable is you neat writing capability.Just keep writing and it will blossom.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Believe me. I thought you are really seeing a ghost. Only when I read that it was something else(Why spoil suspense for subsequent readers?) I had to burst out laughing. The way you carry out light fun through the narration has really captured my imagination. I am on the way to raid your portfolio. Watch out and thanks and keep writing....


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Review of A Love So True  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.0)
after looking at the "A poem I once wrote for the love of my life.", I came to read this with the expectation of some highly worded explanation of love. What I found is simply different and happens to be a neatly written poem with simple words. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you.


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Review of ICEBERG  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.5)
"To temporarily exit the day and go into a room for twenty minutes and try to find some measure of peace, then re-enter the madness of the day with the usual noisy brain, to me has never made any sense at all." You have hit the nail on the head. But how many are going to think about it and how many are going to accept it? I am sure almost anyone reading these lines simply will gloss over it.
I am not sure why you have talked about the Titanic in the first paragraph. Otherwise, I fully agree with you in all other aspects. Perhaps, if you write in more detailed fashion it might be more useful.


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Review of Oh Muses  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Oh, did you have a writers' lock or writers' block? Good attempt to come out of it. I do not want to say what you have written is good or has some real good meaning. But I want to say, you have the courage to write and show it to the world. If that happens it has to be good and nothing else. Please write more without bothering the rating and review.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ha..ha..Marriage equated job. I had thought it is equal to career,if there is a difference between job and career! Compared to some of your other articles/stories the fun started to quite early in this one. Agreeably so as the topic itself provides for quite a bit of innovation.As usual the end turned out to be hilarious. A bit of my personal observation(on a serious note) : What generally portrayed explained, described etc.etc.etc. as love tends to be something between a man and woman. Real love is simply beyond that and includes the one just described. Thanks for writing and publishing this one.


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Review of Stranded  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is too short for a story, yet stands out as description of the incident, a good one at that. You have tried to deal with the emotions of a natural friend in the given situation. I liked it from the point view of writing. You English is good. Please try writing longer stories with more scenarios. Thanks.


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Review of House Cleaning  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Surprise here for me. One can write a neat and entertaining article about house cleaning. Of course almost all of us are alike in this. We generally do not like to do the cleaning work, in spite of the fact that we ourselves are responsible for creating the muck. Your conclusion is appreciated for its moral value.


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Review of The Promise  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Some poems are just simply pleasure to read and this one belongs to that category. For me it flowed smoothly from the first line till the last line. As usual while reading the poem I went on searching for my take away. I found it in the second line after bit of deliberation.It was these few words "Wishing the night could be postponed." Thanks for writing them. Keep writing such nice stuff.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (3.0)
There are two things I would like to point out. One writing a letter to yourself is a superb idea. Two
publishing the letter written to yourself should be carried out with adequate care. Reason for this is simple. Communication to external world requires a basic protocol and generally, minimum grammar and uniformity determine that particular property. Please do a bit of proofreading. You have good ideas. Do not let them be the victims of poor presentation.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Thanks for reminding me that I am one day older than I was yesterday. Can I claim to be being wiser than yesterday? Well fun apart, you have nicely explained what is going to happen with each of us as we reach our predestined(?) future. All that I can say is you have a good capability to write. Please write more of such stuff bringing out the suitableness of issues that make up the life itself. Thanks again.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I could not make out why you classified this under Romance/Love and Supernatural. I did not find any romance or supernatural in this part. Of course, there was the unconditional acceptance from the parent(probably interpreted as love). Hope it is reserved for future chapters.Having said that, I need to point out that you have the ability to create a good story out of a thin story line through the sheer ability of explanation through the use of the language. A little bit of imagination can get many more interesting things to pour out of you. I have tried to pick some English grammar issues without any success.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.5)
First and foremost thing I liked about this poem is excellent rhyming. The idea too is a nice one. It touches on the hopes, expectations, aspirations etc. that go into the marriage. You have been able to bring out the inevitability of the change that brings up and downs where it leads to a lot of disappointments and heart burn. I am still pondering to extract meanings out of the last two lines "But surely horses leave a stable,
Returning freer, fit and able.". They seem to have more than one meaning. Thanks for writing this one and keep writing.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I do not understand why you included it under fantasy. Again, if you had not given the introduction and had written in three chapters/sections I still would have taken it to be short story which surprisingly ended in an hilarious manner.The uncertainties of life have been projected pretty nicely in the narration. I can see and understand the amount of effort you have put in. Please keep writing good stuff.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A good gripping story. At the beginning I thought that the experienced intergalactic travelers had the ability to fight anything and anyone and are armed with superior technology and capability. Somehow in spite of their experience and proven capabilities they found themselves in a tricky situation. As a story it looks slightly wild. But I can appreciate your imagination running really wild here. As a writer that is your strong point. Keep it up and keep writing.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a nice portrayal of dance of emotions in a small piece of writing. I liked it for the reason that it clearly shows how helpless we make ourselves in front of the assumed/imagined authority. It also shows how our conscience keeps biting us when we do something against our own personal will. Thanks for a good emotional roller coaster ride. Keep writing. About giving two viewpoints on the same incident, I have to call it as a nice idea provided it gives room for display of more emotions.


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Review of Dreaming  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (3.5)
"It is hard to fee anything" please insert the missing letter. I understand your statement "When I awake I hope reality is better than in here" with a caveat that you are in more control on the dream than on the reality! A word with the tittle too. Should it not be "Dreaming about hope"?


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Review of Hit me  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Why have you written this? Any purpose? Even doing nonsense requires some purpose. I do not see any purpose behind this except one. It says you can think. It says you can write. It says you can understand what is meant by feelings. Now let me ask you a question : Can you give a direction to all those to be called as a good writer?


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Review of Our Heroes  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You have decently large list of achievers in a neat looking poem as a tribute. All of the acts mentioned we were carried out under adverse conditions. It is a very good attempt. Even the organization looks to be logical. I liked it immensely. Continue writing and publishing such stuff. Thanks.


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Review of Life of Teenager  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (2.5)
This one is pretty badly formatted. I request you to format it properly. However as like to know about the teenagers of today I decided to read it further hoping to understand what is written.I am sorry that I had to give up after the first paragraph. There were awkward grammar errors in the first paragraph itself, if it happens to be normal text. I still would like to read your stuff, if you format the thing properly.


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Review of Humanity  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.0)
After reading your piece of the work the definition of humanity given at the top needs to be changed! Well you have tried to explain the peculiarities of what it means to be human rather well. However, If you have tried to weave the same thing as a part of a story it would have made much more sense than presenting it this way. You have the capability to write. Please develop on that one.

I did not search deeply for english related issues in writing. But it looks as if "Hence, the reason for frustration within ourselves" word "the" is at a wrong place or some sort of correction to the sentence may be needed. Please double check and do the needful.


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Review of Photosynthesis  
Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I do not know why you classified this imaginative stuff as satire. What I saw in this piece of writing is the flowering imagination in trying tell the story. It is a well known repetitive thing happening in the nature day after day. But when you bring in imagination and mix it with a little bit of creativity the outcome can be something really different. You attempt is worthwhile. At the same time, I would urge you to push your imagination a notch above than what you have displayed here. Thanks anyway.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (3.5)
"you had finished yours while it was hot" and reference to coffee is so apt. It is a nice little poem and a time pass without much to offer, yet, highly readable.I have sincere appreciation for this kind of stuff because I am unable to write this kind, how much ever I try. Please keep writing.


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Review by RogerBlingham
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I read this twice before writing this review. I generally avoid reading about cruelty a second time for my own personal reasons. You have been able to point to the cruelty built into human nature with several examples.We as humans generally fail to understand why pain inside us is different from pain outside of us.However, your trying seems to be reasonable and adequate.
But with all this I am not sure what is my take out of the reading although it served in reminding me about my thoughts about the pain in two different places.To that extent the split between the two worlds is quite evident.

The question is could it have been more coherent?

As far as writing mechanics are concerned, I am totally impressed. I have tried hard to find grammatical and other language related issues without any success.

Keep writing.


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