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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello Andy Owens,

I really like the premises for your story.
Is there a specific age group you are trying to write this for? Also is there more to the ending of this story? The title and the description make it seem like there will be a fight but this seems to just be the beginning.
I really look forward to reading more.
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