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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am amazed that this work was presented to this site 5 years before now! What a transformation you must have made to grow even further from this wonderful written piece of work. You have established that you have written this tale to a particular person, thus explaining the thematic usage of the repeated pronoun "You". You clearly expressed the Majesty and enthralled nature that your soul mate has in your eyes, mind and heart. Thank you for sharing this with us, Zeke. Well written, indeed! Never stop writing!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Another excellent chapter is Chapter 6, C Scott Gray! The constant threat of danger coupled with the intelligence, strategy and strength of our primary character was wonderful to read. A little humour that your provided was also well received. My only suggestion comes from format. When you read a long story, you need to have short paragraphs and sentences. Some of the sentences could be shorten a little or broken up. Otherwise an excellent Chapter, please keep writing!


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Review of Black Magic  
Rated: E | (3.5)
I am saddened, Aimber. It was so poorly edited, that I had difficulty following the story. Spacing, spelling and grammatical errors permeated this great tale and I was forced to downgrade your effort to a sad 3.5 stars. Your description of this man and his acts were powerful and gave a sense of foreboding dread. You have a strong sense of settings. But if your reader can't read it....it counts for nothing. Please re-edit this work and get a much higher rating, you deserve it. Keep writing.


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Review of The Encounter  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I gasp Dean at the detail and vivid description that you put into this critical piece of work that you wrote some 4 years earlier. I am deeply impressed by how well you crafted the characters, prepared the ground for the encounter, explained the Macedonian invasion of India with such simplicity and yet such elegance. Honestly I thought I should find some criticism, but other than a bit of drag in the middle which by the end proves critical, there is no real criticism. Thank you Dean, keep writing!


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Review of Mirror of Reality  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I was a little nervous about this as reality isn't in my wheelhouse. While editing is needed, the general theme of reality, mirror changes and magic is very interesting. Obviously as a fan of genderswapping lesbian romance, this was nice. So to speed up this review, you had good characters in the principal character and his sister, consistency in the settings and you attracted people to contribute. Keep writing! We;; done
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Review of Finding Love  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Well....this story has a lot going on. The themes of family, adulthood, growing up....I am going to try to review it not for the plot and contents, but more for its artistic value. It is a nice story, well spaced, strong conversations progressing, good characterisation and its extremely consistent. So a nice job, please keep writing more of your short stories. I am certain the next one will be even better!


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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This has potential! I can't fully understand your reluctance as literarikinesis has always been something that I have found interesting. If I take possession of this, I have some integrative plans I know people will like. Hawkeye Pierce and Consul Asinius trusted me with their work, I can show the same with this. It just needs a little editing and attention! This is awesome, thanks again Dayaman. Keep writing!
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Review of That's you  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi JP,

I must be blessed today! After a rough start, the day is going really well with all these fantastic stories, poems, pieces, novels and other writing shining through today! I have lost track how many 4 or 4.5 stars; that I have awarded today. This story is so sad and touching, I will look past the blasted rhyming to give you the near maximum. Well done, JP! And to think this was 3 years ago! Keep writing great pieces like this!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow!

Tabitha was right, this was a good one. Short, but full of mystery, of the nature of reality and the neverending search for true freedom from oppression whether internal or external. I am stunned to see such a novice display such a mastery of expression; the ability to convey so much with so few letters. I wish I could display such a skill. I am deeply impressed, Lecters Protege, keep writing for you are now Lecters Master.


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Review of Bite of Vengeance  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ok, I figured out she was a dog when I heard the words obedient; but it didn't detract from the beautiful way that this story was written. It was so clever the way that Vesta acted. Less like a dog and more like a human, romantic companion. It was very impressive, all round. I can think of no higher compliment or discussion other than to give it a high score. Congratulations and please Tabitha, keep writing.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
A brilliant story, Maryann. I am excited to read that you wrote this 13 years ago! Are you published yet? If so, could you suggest what steps would be best to get started. I seem to be writing these days for fun, because I have rewritten my stories many times. Anyway, this story was brilliant. The way your characters experience things, describe things and act are brilliant. Thanks for preparing it, keep writing like always!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well I'm not one for fantasy stories. In truth, I find their mythology overly complex and in need of an encyclopedia or index to follow correctly. This however was not one of those stories. Now this is what I look forward to reading, Scott Gray. It's beautiful and strong and full of poetry, especially for a book. It has that beautiful human touch, something we can all relate to. The endless battle between adventure and pride and nature and man. You could feel Ai'Liel' s terror and pain as nature struck him down. Wonderfully written, please keep writing!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Well this is interesting Yoshi King. It has potential to be a great fic if you take the time to check each chapter for spelling errors or continuity errors. I look forward to seeing it again once it has around 400 chapters. Thanks again for writing such an intriguing concept, keep writing and preparing works with such innovative themes. And maybe watch out for repetition (innovative, intriguing, interesting).
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interesting idea. It makes for interesting reading. My sole suggestion is that you need a 5th option at the opening chapter. Otherwise this is a very reasonable concept. So let's review on the basis of Jim, the one I read. I like the transformation and the way it was well described. It doesn't look like you got a lot of contributions. I will talk to some of my fellow gender bending enthusiasts about that. Thanks again and keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was an interesting and short piece, Sum1. I can't say that it was fantastic, it had some, thankfully little rhyming. It had repetition which lowers the overall seriousness of the poem. But that appears with the theme of love, desire, longing and devotion. It was a simple, pleasant work that focused on the concepts of time and sleep in addition to the aforementioned themes. I look forward to reading more recent pieces. Well done, keep writing,


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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Sorry Kyle. This was well written for the most part. But sadly there was a lot of issues with character identification. Who is Kyle? Why is Layle first barely capable of Fire of Colour, then in the next able to master the highly difficult silver fire? I like how you established the evil of the Dark Lord, how he was the master of shadows and the way you had Layle show his courage to avenge his beloved Ivy. I suggest that you re-edit and clarify this story. I know there is a word limit, but otherwise it is hard to follow. Well done, keep going


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Review of I'm Still Me  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Aspergers Syndrome, the aptly mentioned life sentence, condemns people to a life of confusion, inability to fully follow others or make meaningful relationships after the age of 18. This is a great piece of work, Big Bad Wolf. Thank you so much for having the courage to confess to being an "Aspie"! Many others either revel in being one or express severe shame and pretend not to have that crippling, horrible condition. Hope you get published, thanks again for your strength.


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Review of Anna's Jealousy  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is an interesting story. It has lot of options and threads. The one where Anna moves on and meets someone new makes me feel good. I like the original idea that this concept provides to us. Anna makes a very engaging character with an interest personality. I like the thread where she decides to recommit to an old friendship again. Thanks again for offering it to us SoapySuds! Well written and look forward to more!
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Review of Edge  
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Rated: E
Well now....this is another blast from the past that deserved another bump into the feature. The prose, the choice of description, the desire of all of us to fight against the powerful grip of despair, death and destruction. Three beasts who are all the same. I am very impressed about what you have written and thus if I could grant you 4.5 stars. I cannot think what I could add to this fine piece. Thank you and keep writing, Go TEAM PAT!! Keep our spot!


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Rated: E | (4.0)
An excellent poll. Interesting the top 3 are all the reasons that I contribute here. Though I don't know how long I will be able to do this. Cubby, you are a very clever person to have developed such a fine poll for all of us to enjoy. I very much look forward to reviewing other works of yours. Thanks for this contribution and I wish you all the best in all of your endeavors! Please keep writing!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
destroyer, i haven't read much but this seems like a reasonable piece of work. Just edit some of the chapters a little. Nice concept, similar to Random TG Thoughts.
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In affiliation with RAOK Upgrade Brigade Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
There is nothing like some wicked, cruel, bullying toerag who rules with his fists being brought down to size, by waking up as a tiny girl. Even better if he is also a womaniser just like A Mile in Her Thongs 2 by Wanderer. The classic magical karma whether by hex, object, chemical or technology appeals to those who feel slighted or desire genuine justice. Watching the bullying toerag squirm and hopefully learn is the best part. Love this poll.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This may be second only to God's Telephone amongst the works I have read. I am left unable to do much to respond. I tried to follow your exercise, but at present found the exercise far too daunting. I look forward to undertake it at a later date. So what can I say about this work that takes a mental image and puts it to life? Well my journey isn't concluded nor I suspect is mysticmuse. Nevertheless love the way you bring into physical creation, mental workings. Top Notch!


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Review of Sisterhood  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I wanted to review one of your work, purple/purpleprincess as soon as I found the correct one. To my delight, I uncovered this wonderful short story of yours. It was so well written, I was almost unaware that the person undergoing this experience was female (I am hoping that you never felt this isolated). What a touching tale, that honestly I can think of nothing to critique. Well written and keep writing these beautiful works!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Kathie, that was incredible well written and suspenseful! I kept waiting for the rug to be pulled out from Beth's feet, but it never came. Brian proved to be every inch the hero that people expect, although it has only been 2 years that they have been together. That Ray sounds like an awesome douchebag! That someone could trash both a profession and a name in such an awful way is sad. I also thought Lonnie was an awesome friend, despite his obvious longing for Beth that would always be unrequited. Top notch, well done! 4.5 stars and keep contributing your writing to this site! It's needed!


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