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Review of Potter Poll  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
An excellent poll to post on this site! Because the chief villain is a murderous Hitler style bigoted serial murderer (Lord Voldemort/Tom Marvolo Riddle) who considers those born to magical families superior to everyone else, I think if anything it shows the reverse. That Harry Potter is anti-witchcraft as even the neutral characters (Cornelius Fudge and Rufus Scrimgeour are wicked, coldhearted wizards). Thanks for the opportunity to vent my feelings on the matter!
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Review of Her Majesty  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A nice story indeed! It just needs more entries to make this story more interesting!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow that was....succinct! Its my first time reviewing a moderator and I am suitably impressed by the response to this challenge. It was quite brief, but it managed to convey feelings that we all feel towards this site. I also am impressed by the design of your avatar. So I think a 4 star is a suitable rating for this nice little poem. Keep writing and contributing to this site, sunnystarr. I look forward to reading more.


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Review of your my sister  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
One of the difference between a real great interactive story and a good concept is the opening chapter. This one is both too short and has poor grammar. This story is in great need of an edit. I always feel bad when I have to give a review that is less positive than negative. But an 8 year old girl who turns her brother into a girl/woman should have more than just has a ray. Where did she get it? Did one of her parents leave it behind? Is Sarah supremely gifted? Or a supernatural being? Did someone give it to her? And her motivation; while obviously weak if it was given to her or if she is supernatural; should be strong if she is supremely gifted. Sorry Shadow
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Another wonderful justice story. I love watching some self-centered central character get a bit of well earned justice! Please provide us with more! Thanks again for Stealing from a Sorcerer, Christy_D!
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Review of RealityShift.net  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This deserves a 17/20. A fine story with the potential to go further. I look forward to reading more from your portfolio. Go D-Mented-One, that was fantastic.
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Review of Wishing Stone  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Nice thread. Full of vigour and pep. An examination both in life and in the lives of loved ones. I think this is a great thread. Keep going and don't forget to edit!
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I wanted to give you a higher rating. I truly did. But the threads just don't have much interest. Part of getting a good review from me for an interactive is attracting interest. Sadly, while the first thread is interesting, the quantum leap one is not. Nice try, please keep writing!
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This isn't a bad thread. It has a lot of potential. I just think that you might need to make some more additions to challenge others. Nevertheless not bad, keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That was beautiful! There really isn't any else that needs to be said!


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a great crossdressing story. Top notch effort! I am not big on cross-dressing, so I made my contribution lesbian genderbending. But still excellent idea!
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Review of I Don't Think So  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love all your work, Wanderer! So consider this 4.5 stars something for all of them!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is an excellent thread. If the editing was done more, I would give it higher. Also the obsession with obesity is not really my thing. Otherwise, what a great idea! Keep going!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Casey, I wanted to give you 4.5 stars. I truly did. But I couldn't help but worry that this would bring complacency. Some of this is in desperate need of editing! And some contributions are just pointless. So I will give you 4 stars in the hope that you will reform some of the weakness of this amazing and brilliant story! Please give us more!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
What an unique take on genderbending! Instead of cursing, chemicals, objects or anything; we have self infliction as well as the potential for any form of transformation! Cardio, you have hit a winner here! A special thanks to Lexy for her unique take on the relationship between Shawn and Becky! Well written everyone who contributed!
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Review of The Witch Sister  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Okay, I love the possibilities that this awesome interactive offers. Kat's motivation is highly suspect, but capable of many things. Is she evil, misguided or justified in her anger? And how nice is the lazy Dan? Is he actually that nice or is he kinda of a jackass who you want to undergo suffering? I like that we have multiple threads about which way our primary character functions. Thank you very much, Grand Duke!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am going to brief in my review of this interactive. It is a good series with a lot of options. It just needs regular editing. The character of Christy is very good.
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Well this is informative. I can't help but wonder if it might be better offering trial paid memberships for free and 2000 GPs just to entice more people to this site. As for advertising, while I appreciate the need for banner ads to get people involved, I would caution people about the choice of advertising that you put up. Some people might be offended or too young to cope with some of the raunchier advertising. Just as a thought
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There is something to be said for simplicity! That was simply lovely! It had a clever theme and plot. Engaging and believable characters and the delightful honesty that an innocent child could provide. And little Sarai sounds like a very clever little girl. And I loved the way Nana was able to win over Scarlett. What surprising names for girls, Sarai and Scarlett. Well written and thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks Queenowl


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Funny neighbours indeed! Each one seems to have their own quirk, their own oddness! How interesting how traditional, one might even say backwards, the neighbours are compared to the modern Michelle. The only twist missing is Sherry expressing a romantic/sexual interest in Michelle. Honestly this is a nice little story and I will give it 4 stars. I am not really won over by this story in the same way as some of your works, because I find these characters slightly one-dimensional. The Sherry is secretly a closet case would actually give this story a lift, but that's me. Norma as another, relatively modern person does add something. Well written, look forward to expanding it or further chapters.


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Review of Boss Hog Family  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Interest chapter, J.E. Durham! Seth certainly has the making of a Malcolm from Malcolm in the Middle like character. I recognise the sarcasm, the completely shocked incredulity of being related to such unusual people. And mostly, the contrast in the interactions between the cranky Grandma a la Ida with Seth/Malcolm juxtaposed with her relationship with Starr/Reese. Very well prepared, look forward to more.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Oh if only it was that simply to end that myriad of thoughts that pulsate and demand processing in our tender cerebral cortexes! Another fine example of a well "thought out"; yes I said that!; piece of writing, exploring the convention of men and women. J.E.Durham, you truly have a gift for these pieces! I look forward to undergoing the undertake of exploring the full depths of your vast portfolio. Keep creating, my friend!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well this seemed genuine and honest. It was well written. It would have been easier to read if it was broken up into smaller paragraphs though, but that is about the harsher criticism I will give you. Let me know how things went with Nettie, I will be rooting for you. Being 17 truly sucks, believe me it gets a lot easier and harder at the same time. You will not really want to go back if you are honest. I look forward to hearing from you. Well written, new friend and I hope romance between you and Nettie comes through.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I don't like to express personal opinion in a review. However when a review touches you, you must respond. I almost gave this a 5 star. I have only given out one to a truly sad story. I pray this was a work of fiction. It is too horrible to be real. I can't say well written because I don't know if this is real or not. And though if it is, you will not want to hear it, that proves the quality of what has been typed. Best wishes and condolences.


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Review of Santa Stalker  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Okay, that was funny! I love the one you turned a classic song into the best way to express a sentiment shown in the movie Fred Claus. I am pleased someone took the time to declare what a wonderful, alternative view this is to the classic legend of the old fat red suited man entered domiciles without express permission. Brilliantly crafted and the use of the Tommy machine gun, was that a Futurama reference? Delightful, keep writiny!
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