Wowww...I was thinking this was relating to me...lol! I like it very much but could not find anything that I would have changed! Sorry I could not have been more contructive...good job!
I was loking for some great tips to give you but I could come up with nothing! I think this poem was so poetically said and would not change anything. I would love to read more of your work.Good job!
To be honest, I see nothing wrong with your poem.It is very beautiful and something we should appreciate because many do not have those gifts. Keep up the good work!
I would give a more constructive opinion if I knew what some of the words meant...such as ennui,shoals, foals,etc....Takes to long for me to look up but what I got out of it....is being at a low in life and realizing your not alone. Correct me if I'm wrong but I still liked it by what I grasped out of it....:)...
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