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Review by Jessaumtumnight
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found your writing precise, to the point and informative. I appreciated the little bit of extra advice, thanks!
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Review by Jessaumtumnight
Rated: E | (4.5)
I guess this is more a response to what you have to say then a critique on your writing style. But I enjoyed reading your opinion and the main idea was easily read and understood.

Well, I do agree and disagree with you. But, I know from watching the women around me, that I'm not the norm. I was raised by my father. My mother was never really in my life, and when she was it was never a good thing. The last man I was with, was actually the one for pushing marriage. NOT me. I'm actually scared of it. I have a daughter now. Still I'm unmarried, and one of the things that I'm most concerned about is her knowing who she is and wants to be. I'm incredibly uninterested in pushing the idea that you have to act right or the boys won't like you. Which I think is why a fair amount of women lose parts of themselves. From focusing on doing too many things right and then they lose themselves in the details.

As for me I have no interest in that. I do want a lifelong mate, but I can wait. My lifelong goal is an interesting life and a full one. It's not a new thing that's for sure though. Used to be that there weren't any places that would hire a woman. So a woman basically had to get a man, and try to keep him in order to keep herself fed and sheltered. So I think it's better now than it used to be.
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Review by Jessaumtumnight
Rated: E | (5.0)
The best virus protection that I have is Norton. We have to pay for it yearly. But, when we didn't have it, the Windows firewall just wasn't the kind of protection that we needed. That we had to replace the computer twice because of phony anti-virus programs. There are virus programs out there that will infect your computer with other viruses, then make you pay to "remove" them. Then once your subscription is up they reinfect your computer. So you have to be careful! Read the reviews and go to the Kim Kommando website for advice if your aren't sure! She's a lifesaver.
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Review of Grandfather  
Review by Jessaumtumnight
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked the way you brought humanity towards something most of us fear in some way. Because as our technology grows, our fear does as well in some intrinsic way that "they" might take over. I liked your interesting take on the possible future. Your story is well written. I don't really have any criticism of it. I think you've done a great job so far. Keep it up
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