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Review of Tides  
Review by bookdragon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Personally speaking, I am not the best poet. However, I do like poetry! I like the personification you give to the ocean, my favorite line"blue toes make sands wet." I wasn"t sure about "Miles of thought muffle waves." It just doesn't sound quite right, though I'm not quite sure what the problem is. Otherwise, I love how you make the sea sound like a living thing.
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