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Emery Diamonds

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#3668032

Review of An Ode To My Critics

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I like this. It expresses your feelings about criticism. It can be a hard thing to take at times but at the same time, it is what keeps us writers writing more. It is what gives us the drive to prove those critics wrong. I think any writer who is passionate about their work can relate to this.

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#3661217

Review of NON EXISTENT LOVE

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

I agree that alot of people don't really know what love is but only say it sometimes to get what they want. I see alot of people being heartbroken with regret because of the thngs they did because someone "loved" them. I always wished this world would be more honest. I think honesty could save lives.

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#3660712

Review of Errant Pitch

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Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

That's a cute short story. It could happen to anyone but I can only imagine the fear those two girls would have if they woke up in a jail cell only becuase they threw a snow ball at an police officer. I know I would be embarrasses but I hope they think twice about it next time.

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#3660711

Review of Chapter 2 - Shifters

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I can't tell you how good this chapter is because the writing is really small. You would mind reposting it in a bigger font that way readers can enjoy this chapter of your writing. Please let me know if you do that way I and others can read this. Thanks again.

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#3660709

Review of Chapter 1- A Cure for Immortality

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

This I can definitely say is very interesting. I never expected shifters, I was expecting more along the lines of vampires. It has a steady flow and I can definitely tell that this could be a page turner. I can't wait ot read the next section and if it's as good as this chapter, I would say you have an award winning novel on your hands. Keep up the good work.

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#3660705

Review of Confessions of a 4 year-old

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

i have to say that this is fantastic, It really tells a story and the dialogue really sets it off. The feelings that someone has when they are abandonecd are horrible but when one person comes to the rescue, t makes someone's life a little brighter through ttheir lost.

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#3660462

Review of An Abandoned Tomorrow

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Rated: E

| (3.5)

People do waste life sitting around doing nothing but complaining. That is true. As for your writing, try to be a little more detailed because without the describtion, I wouldn't know what this was about.Nice writing though.