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Review of Apple Fling  
Review by beanner
Rated: E | (4.0)
The words were honest. The message was clear. But I feel the consistency with the changes of the seasons weren't finished...what about winter. The theme of winter represents death yet you left it as a question? I would like it to continue. I believe your words and can feel the change, but it needs more.
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