I judge stories by the feelings I get from them. This one had me a few moments and stayed pretty consistant throughout. Your writing's good. Some promblems here and there, needs some editing but I'm not going into that because I'm not an editor. I can sugest a few books, First Five Pages, is great, and Editing for Non-Fiction Writers is another good one. By the way, have you submitted before? Your comming close here with publishable work here, just my opinion though. The more stories you write the better you going to get and I think your well on your way. Who do you read, if you dont mind me asking?
Insane, weird, interensting, intriuging, and it made me laugh in a stupid way.
But of coures its not a story. almost more of a joke than anything.
But hey I liked it.
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