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Review of In the Interim  
Review by gnite_gracie
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I liked this poem, very poignant and kind of bitter.

Only thing to be corrected is spelling.

where = should be 'were'
peaking = should be 'peeking'
alchohol = should be 'alcohol'
loose = should be 'lose'
messured = should be 'measured'

Great job!
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