Good choice of words and phrases to relay your experience, however, you might want to look at a few changes to help better convey the emotions you are expressing in this poem. Run it through a spell checker so that any words misspelled are done so on purpose. It may read better with less spacing between the lines. I did rather like the "Why...is the opaque word" - that was a nice turn of phrase.
Great story, really pulls the reader into the visual of both the fairy tale being told and the story itself. You can almost see the kids yawning and fighting to stay awake to hear more of the story. Left me smiling.
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