I know that being one of the charitable shenanigans makes me one of the best people to join this ostentatious group and regardless of when I will get a gift I will not ask who did it. I also promise to reveal the origin of Santa Claus because recently he has become more mysterious than grandpa... no grandpa has been Santa Claus... wait...!
i will read next time the whole of it ... let me sleep first so that I will read the rest the following day for a whole afternoon....! Jeez, I felt the coldness of the her atmosphere at some point! Promise!
You freaked me but I am okay ... anyway it only means that you are great in this job and should write more poem and great style while writing, I see that most people may not understand why some people do some things but unless they know the world before then how will they see the one that follows.
honorary, that was the last thing I had in mind, thanks a lot for the final execution of plot, right head on girl and seriously, I fan, twist endings they will never fail in leaving a thrilling impression on readers. Will never mind reading more of these!
I would give 10 if you said where the buzz sound comes from, you see, I mean, "how can you make some of us feel so frustrated about a sound that costed 12 stitches on the head, $8,993 and worse still some sleepless nights. I promise if you edit this small part I will give 10! YOU MUST BE A GREAT STORY TELLER! still mad, anyways!
great lines, and most importantly, I love the final message of the whole poem. Please keep it up and with deep yet simple style is one of the renowned ways to acknowledge the cry of human soul. Deep stuff! do not know how else to put it other than that!
I must admit at one point I knew you spoke of a evil thing and then at one point I knew it was about some haunted house, another time I became assure that the that only person who you spoke of is in the world beyond the human race. Congratulations, you must have been a star before you shone like a sun!
I think that expressing oneself in words only to them but wishes to convey in a song to the rest means that life is fair at the time. On the other hand, we sing what we feel and so we speak what feel and think. My poem is not a song but a story that anyone would never mind sharing at any one time!
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