what a wonderful way to start my day with this beautiful poem:) I am glad I read this today.Well crafted.I rode with you on the bicycle - I rely on the writer to describe the surroundings to their best so I can imagine & recreate the same while i go through their writing . You can get your audience hooked only if they can imagine each word & every little detail of the surroundings..You did a great job:)
Very touching indeed. I was moved with each word.Jack certainly seemed like an ordinary man ..An ordinary man who seem to have seen extraordinary hardships in life. Well crafted , well structured to summarize a lifetime that Jack lived.
what could be better or included -
something that rhymed could have added more grace:)
Either ways enjoyed it throughly.
Best,
Shipra
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