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Review by Side Salad
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Another excllent piece, the thought which has gone into this shames the likes of me, who just by nature scribble down nonsense!

The layout and again, the thought that has gone into is a nice touch, this is a good piece, the narrative pushes this piece along, it is really strong and because of the strength of it the pome never feels as if it is overstaying its welcome.

James
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Review of Aim, Misfired  
Review by Side Salad
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is very good, yet again you have written a superb piece.

This one almost lulls you into a false sense of safety. Initially I read it and though, oh no, another love poem about someone having beautiful eyes!

Then it hits you as you read it, it has real emotion and comes at you. The language used is excellent, the way you take the eyes themselves and expand them to symbolise so much is amazing.

My first 4.5!


I love this piece, it's brilliant.
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Review by Side Salad
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is very good - it is longer than I am normally able to stand in poetry.

But you have an obvious skill and you have managed to hold my attention well - I think that if you can't write a piece this long and manage to make it interesting you have really achieved something.

It's a really great piece, you can learn a lot about writing from it.

James
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Review of Feelings  
Review by Side Salad
Rated: E | (4.0)
there are a couple of things you use in this poem which really add to it, the first is the couplet idea, I laugh becuase i am Happy, I cry becuase I am happy etc etc..

That works really well and in the least it shows that you think about the writing and that you try ideas out, this approach can only lead you to to understanding your writing more importantly improve what you write.

The second is the middle part of the poem, which really good - it's strange because on first glance this does not appear a very well constructed piece, but on reading it's good.

I really like the thought you have put into this.

James
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