I like this too. My impression of Jesus was much more than the son of God, he may be everything to all and nothing to one. More myth than man, better than God because he gave up his life as well for the sins we are now casting upon ourselves as well as others. This is great!
I love this! It is so forceful in its attempt to remember those who lost so much in an era of troublesome chaos and grief. Yes why hate, the emotion that is so easy to feel yet so hard for us to overcome, our differences and yet our sameness.
Why not just live and let live.
I love the vibrant flow and the endless tears. Maybe of defeat, despair? who knows but the story must go on and the novel needs to gotten back to, the poem needs a master or mistress to conquer it and present itself, as if the poem needs any other presentation other than itself.
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