a very nice story you have written here on writing.com. I found the story to be extremely easy to follow and could see what was going on in the boys life as i was reading your article you have written here. Please keep up the good work in your writing you do here at writing.com
From what I can tell by the introduction of your book you have created here on writing.com is a wonderful story you have written here. When I have more time I plan to read and see whawt the story is all about that you have written here. I am going to add it to my favorites so i can read it.
A really nice story you have written here about rivers that flow thoughtout the world and the united states. The flow of the story was very smooth and interesting and fun to read. Please keep up the good work in all of the writings you create here and elsewhere.
This story about the red planet sounds very ineresting to me. I found the story to be very easy to follow and read. please keep up the good work and i can not wait to finish reading more when you get it done. Your writings is an inspration to us writers here on writing.com
Wow I see that you have created more then one article on google here. That is a wonderful creation you have created here on writing.com. Please keep up the good work with your reporting on the site of google. I found this information also to be useful to the writeres here.
This is wonderful idea you have put on this site to advise the writers here about google and what is going on with it. I used google only a few times and did not care for what it came back with. I always use webcrawler all the time. Please keep us writers informed on every aspect of google. I found this info very useful.
THis was an interesting short story to read. The flow of words was smooth and few if any errors i did see. I found it to be a quick short reading and you have written a wonderful short story here. Please keep up with the writing of short stories. Good luck!!
It sound like you dont care if it makes it to publication here, maybe it is just one of the dreams you had a decided to write about it and make it into a book. Then maybe again it will make it into publication and make you some dough that is. Good luck in writing this.
A very excellent poem you have written here. It is very short and sweet to the point, that is is about love you have created this poem about. It look like you will be a good poem writer as time goes by. Good luck in all your endevours you do here. I know it takes a lot of concentration to write one and wish i had the talent to write poetry.
An wonderful story you have written here. It makes me wonder if you are ever going to put together a book of your writings you are working on here. I wish you all the luck in any writings that you are doing here. Good luck to you and any endeavor you are planning on doing.
This poem you written in honor of the sister who died in you arms. I hope it was a way to write of any feeling you had when she died. It looks like it may be a way to vent those feelings in a way that it would not harm anyone at all. I know what it is like to loose someone close to you. I have lost both of my parents.
A nice essay you have created here. I hope this is an article you created for school use and you recieved a fairly good grade on it. You have a good talent here in writting essays and I hope you continue to write essays for classes as they are required by the instructors there.
This book entry looks like a good chapter two to your book you are in the process of writing here on writing.com. The entry looks like the book is in a school type setting. It looks like it is in some type of class room you are in. Please keep writing your book and hopefully someday you will be a published athour.
This story was an very interesting story in itself. I live in a state where it is cold in the wintertime it made me feel colder than what it really it and sent the chill downs my spine. It was an very interesting story in fact. So keep up with your writing encevour here
I found this article to be a very informative and helpful in helping the members of writing.com. I Like it when the staff of writing.com. I hope you will continue to provide the members of writing.com. I know it is hard to keep up with stuff when you are running the site, so much has to be done to keep it running smoothly.
This is a good idea it helps those who are not doing reviews and it trys to encourage them to do. I was a member of the convention pirates and did a few reviews there and wished i had more time to do them. In the past 3 days now i have to this one done a total of 20 reviews and trying to do about 4 more today yet before i get off.
An excellent story you have written here. I see you are keeping up with writting this story with all the scences you have written here. Are you in the process of writting a book or just doing this for your own use. If you are working on a book good luck with it. My wife is in the process of writing book.
I found these lyrics to be a good start to a song if you are into writing lyrics for songs. keep up the good work on doing these lyrics. It looks like you may be a song writer.
An excellant poem in regards to someone or couple who are engaging in act that shows that they love each other. It decribes how each member feels when it happens.
An excellant poem in regards to an bad kisser. If the kiss doesn't feel right than it could be that the person could be lying or cheating on someone else.
I found the first chapter of your book to be very interesting, since i dont even like football at all. I have not cared to watch or listen to it since i was a kid. I hope that you are planning to continue writing this book and someday get it published. Are you planning to get it published?
This article makes me feel for those that have cancer. On of the people i work with just had his nephew die from having cancer and being treated by chemo for it and also a sister in law who had but the chemo worked there for her. I wish they could find a permenant cure for cancer someday. It would also help if everyone would just stop smoking instantly but that will never happen in any time unless they kill all the tobacco plants.
The newsletters are helpful to the people who recieve them, it provides important information to those who need help in doing stuff on your site of writing.com. Keep up the good work with the newsletters and my start one where members can supply info in for people to use.
An excellant idea storymistress, I hope that all goes well with your raffle idea, better than the one that i have running now. I wish mine would do better. It is to help those in need of an upgrade.
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