Wonderful poem! i like the first line the most. I have no idea why but the sound of it is awesome!
"A mist falls over the woods"
The poem goes together perfectly and I love the words you used!
it is short and simple but vary special!
It vary mystical and dark and the way it should be- Love how it leaves at the end with a slight fright.
Oh what a wonderful poem!
I loved the whole poem because it nicely fit together in a soothing harmony (if you know what I mean)
Its so sad that it ended with
"Knowing that they could never be friends,
They silently walk pass each other,
Never speaking a word again."
but its just perfect because of its purpose.
Sincerely, SodaSaya.
P.S.
I'm looking for a writing buddy to read and talk about each others pieces. If you would like to accept the offer just reply back to me as soon as possible.
I love it! This is the work of someone who has experienced this, this comes from the heart. No one could write this if they had no experience and therefor, this is a masterpiece of love.
Sincerely, SodaSaya.
Your words are brilliant and your love for your purpose of this poem is bright! I highly encourage you to keep writing these wonderful masterpieces and make the world know who you are. You are a true poet!
Sincerely, SodaSaya
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