I believe its a beautiful piece of poetry. Some lines not all are indeed very good. It has great subjectivity and a metaphor is worked out, indeed the poet can do better.
The poem is good in referring to some meters of English Poetry. There not much to read through out but when we come to end we can see some idea otherwise e it is only poetry for fun or leisure.
The last line of The Meter Family Feast try to convery some thing but again fall back to fun.
The story when read in the beginning yields an impression of a regular t.v. show. The story also resembles many of the stories like itself.One of the themes being premonition the story has a touchy ending and engrosses us.
All the characters are well developed and have life.
Its a very good contribution to writing.com community and a very encouraging one. All the authors can refer to this when getting bad ratings.
Well, its quite logical that one shouldn't get disheartened when one gets bad points and bad ratings.
The poet is boosting and goading all of us here and its a lesson to all those who are giving negative feedbacks.
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