This is a good poetry about being the weather king. The taking of the station is important for a weather man. The camera's and lights await him. The job is well done and the poet proclaims himself the weather king. The description of things that go on in the poet's mind is of importance. The mental programming of a weather man has to be perfect to deliver the news. He does the same.
This is a good poem titled mystical. The rhyming is held on with no importance to the spelling of the words. This makes the reading interesting. The contemplation of the inevitable is done while remembering the forgettable. The poet gets lyrical and it is very typical of him doing this. He has to keep hold of his mystical with an air of sophistication. The rhyming keeps the poem going.
This is a nice poetry wishing merry Christmas to the site. The poetry is written with art and style. The rhyming is also nice. The joys and toys of Christmas are on display. The Christmas tree is a German tradition. This information is shared with the readers. The socks are hanging from the fireplace. The poinsettias are from Mexico. The different details make interesting reading.
This is a good poem called still permanent. The poet talks of the things he feels are part of his life. His struggle with realities of his life are there to see. He sees himself like an animal in a cage. He is inside out. And hence, still permanent. The poetry has a good flow to it. It is pleasantly readable and keeps the reader engrossed till the end. The various factors that happen and still everything stays the same or permanent.
This is a nice story about a family orphaned by the death of their parents. The storytelling is handled well with the flow of the story riveting the reader. Jude's search for his brother makes interesting reading. It could part of a larger fiction story. Only the story line has to be handled well without getting too complicated with characters. Also, the plot needs to be less confusing as it seems now. Simple is beautiful.
This is a nice mythological story about Apollos and the other gods. Mythology can make the mind open up and give us a different perspective to how we perceive things normally. It can make us think of things in a lighter vein. The story is well written and engrosses us. It makes us relate to the curse and eventual shortening of the days. The text has some grammar and spelling mistakes, which should be corrected.
This is a good poem about polluted words. It shows how words can pollute the mind. It says why listen to the crap and suffocate. We should not hesitate to seek fresh air. The barbs are called cruel poison. It gnaws at one's vitals in the course of time. We should not complain if one window is closed. We should open up another one. The people who have suffered are with wisdom. They can turn hatred to love. A lot of meaning and purpose is delivered in the poetry.
This is a nice poem about hearts on the street. It shows the plight of a mother, who is in much need. It is written with much ardor and gives out the story of the mother. She trades her body to keep her children going. This is very inspiring as she has no alternatives. She returns in the morning to be reunited with her children. The poetry conveys much meaning and real world issues.
This is a nice story about people in Istanbul. It has a feel of a fiction novel written to engross and involve reader's in its story line. The story winds around the characters and there thinking's and feelings are revealed. The involvement of terrorists, left,right and politics is also seen. The conversations are long winded but add meaning to the story.
This is a nice account of the author's intentions or targets for 2014. The things-to-do are listed in a very systematic manner. The writing is clear and lucid. It is one the clearest minded writings we come across on wdc. The ideas or goals are jotted down and make interesting reading. Many are points we ourselves have as targets on wdc or otherwise. It shows a writer's struggles and travails.
This is a nice poem about knowing the space the author has. The poetry has a good rhyme to it. It is written with good intention. He wants to be outside the mind and outside the box. No prison can confine him. He is completely free. There is so much space to try out what we want. The freedom to write makes him produce words that will remain long after he is dead.
This is a good poetry about the poet's musing's and eventual death. The creature circling above him is a dolphin. The ocean amazes him and he is taken over by it's beauty. His death comes on the ocean floor as he releases the bubbles into the ocean water's. The ocean floor becomes his death bed. The breath from his lungs escape and he can feel the eternal embrace of the ocean. The poetry is good to read and is written with much thought.
This is a good bilingual poem about a sweetheart's love for his/her beloved. This is a translation of a song of a Hindi movie. This makes it interesting and challenging too. The translation is done very well. The explanation of the lyrics are also handled well. The poet has gone to length to explain the lyrics in a well ordered manner. It is written in 7-6 7-6 pattern.
This is a nice poem about wisdom not coming with age. The poet says it does not bring understanding. The tides of time have swept people and some are left standing. The poet reads these words but does not accept them. He is not happy with the conclusion of wisdom coming with age. It makes it seem like we have slept though the lesson being delivered about wisdom.
This is a nice poetry about the murderer Edward Gein. The poetry is good to read and is longer than usual poetry. The descriptions are vivid and make the reader feel engrossed. The poetry reminds a bit of a story told with song and rhythm. His final fate is not known and is not given.
This is a nice poem about a Christmas night. It is written in the Nonet form. The form is interesting to read. The full moon on a Christmas night is a wonderful sight to watch. The Christmas lights are also bright and shining. The fresh snow has beauty to it. It is mother nature's glow. The splendor is crystal in character. The last lines say Santa Claus is forgotten.
This is a nice poem about monkeys. Monkeys are our forefathers and they have many things common with us. The poetry tries to show how these animals live and behave. The older ones eat and clean their bodies, while the young ones hunt. Their arms are described as long and mighty. The tails are strong and slender.
This is a nice poem about being in each other's company. The poem evokes in us a sense of awe about the experiences and situations the poet writes about. It makes us think about the places visited and the people the poet interacts with. Paris, thames, the tower of pisa-all have been visited. The trip brings together different cultures and keeps them together.
This is a nice good story about a girl suffering abuse from her foster parents. The writing is clear and lucid. Her interest in Hockey also shows her verve to fight back. She suffers silently but eventually makes friends who help her out. The story makes us sympathetic towards the girl and makes us angry at her foster parents. The final reporting to the police is something that gives it a good end.
This is a good short account of the author's reflection's on time. The time going too fast and too slow is sometimes we encounter. Childhood is described as slipping away like a water melon on a hot August afternoon. This comparison is good and gives us a glimpse of the author's thoughts. The author does not feel over 20 even if she is 33. She does not look her age and neither do her parents. Her children grow too fast. A good account on reflection's of the mind.
This is a good fantasy fiction story called Galaxia Wars-Verundor. The automatrion test is a test Jack wants to take. It will decide if he has what it takes. The options for the test are autobuster, autobooster, automage and others. This story seems to be set in the future. Jack says he would be the best but does not prepare for it.
This is a nice poem about a brook. The leaves are falling and the brook is pouring. The rhyming is perfect and in sync. The brook pours over outstretched knuckles. It slices away the silence ripple by ripple. A nice piece of poetry by putting together chosen words and rhyme.
This is a nice short poem about too many things being said today. It tells us how too many things have been said today. These things need not be said. They won't matter when the poet lies cold and dead. The poetry is short and simple. It makes good reading and makes us think of things being said by us.
This is a nice poem about angels. Angels are helpful beings who might help us in distress. This poetry etches their features and their goodness. Lucifer was once an angel too. The poetry advises to not follow all angels as some might be demons. This is a good warning to many who have blind faith in angels.
This is a nice short poem for the Than-Bauk oriental poetry contest. The theme is merry Christmas and the poet wishes love from him to the tree this year. The poetry has no caps and punctuations and they have been omitted purposefully. The theme is very much now and can qualify for a prize.
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