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Review by Soulraider
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
This is a nice newsletter about Jane Austen. It has a plethora of information about the author. Following this newsletter would inform the readers about Jane Austen's writing and books. A Janeite is someone with a lot of affection for Jane Austen. The cookies are also something to look forward to.


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Review of Wearing Hats  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good poem about wearing hats. Hats are a style statement and this poem makes us realize it. Different styles for different heads. They are cool and flashy. The poem says donning a worthwhile hat implies one has charm, inspiration and worldly pizzazz. This is very true.
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Review of Coffee  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice short poem about coffee. It is described as acrid and bubbling. It arouses the poet from his dreamland to wake up and drink it. The meaning is clear to us. Coffee makes us feel better and is a good drink to have. Also, the aroma can make us think about things we never thought about.
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Review of Internet Goofs  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good article about making mistakes on one's computer or hitting the wrong keys. It makes us wonder how mistakes happen. Wrongly typed words can convey the wrong meaning. The mistakes in the article are intentional and hence amusing to read. The spelling correcting algorithm in programs can check such mistakes.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a nice story about Sam and how he trains under the professor to learn spells. The story is captivating and makes us read for more. Sam's learning and reciting of the spells is amusing. Every now and then a wizardry or spell story pops its head and makes us learn more about things unnatural. We think spells may exist in the real world or if they could,things would be more exciting.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a good account of the author at her office. It is written in a very straightforward way. The encounter with the boss is short. It does not tell why the "Mafia boss wants me as his". The talk with the receptionist is handled well and can be seen as a day to day interaction with office colleagues.


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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice tribute to a fellow wdc member. It is honest and to the point. Spending more time on wdc makes us familiar with different types of people. The author is impressed by a fellow moderator, making things better for everyone. The words are comforting and reassuring for reading.
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Review of Jokule's Heir  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a nice story about Faybiss receiving the amulet from Jokule. The powers of the amulet makes us wonder if such an amulet could exist in real life. Faybiss's vision of pearls around people and peeking into their past and future makes the story amusing and interesting. The story is a good one and keeps us reading.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice story about parenthood. The young parents and their teenage child are representative of many people struggling to make it. There are lessons we can learn from this story. The writing is clear and effective. The written expression of a writer's thoughts should reach the audience. The same has been achieved by this article.
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Review of Blind Date  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a good story about a man on a blind date. The use of keywords makes the story interesting and makes us think how it is written around them. His dream date is Rachel. He wishes to date her someday. Rhonda is beside him. The account is well written and can be a good contest entry.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a nice story about Jake and Jason. The friendship and differences between friends is captured well. The fight and the bullying are acts in every other relationship. The story is simple in writing and is said in a matter of fact tone. There is more to come in chapter 2, hence it makes it exciting.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good story about the attempt at termination of employment of Santa Claus. The conversation between the characters is well handled. It is both elaborate and makes interesting reading. The individual characters are also described well. The story keeps us going as the characters talk to each other. This makes it engrossing. The final kicking of the Cyborg into a trajectory to the sun is also heart warming.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good poetry about being boring. It is written with heartfelt good intention. The poet feel's out of place for being boring. The lines "The bigger I get, the harder I fall" are classic. They convey much meaning about the emotion's the poet is going through.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very short poetry about a person who has missed school because he has faked sick. The lines are too little to explain things further. He is dying of boredom beneath his grandma's quilt. This can be another way of putting things into a light way.
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Review of Lunar Elcipse  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a nice poetry about a lunar eclipse. It is simple and powerful. The explanation of the eclipse makes interesting reading. It makes us wonder about this celestial phenomenon. The words are used skillfully and do not occupy too much space. In 26 lines the poet describes the eclipse well and to the point.
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Review of Truly  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This is a good poem about things going on in the poet's mind. About being a rebel against things. We all have parallel view about things. This poem is an unabashed way of stating it. The writing has flow to it. It can both attract as well as repel readers. The idea of the poem is to explain what the poet feels about the things around him.
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Review of My Little Flower  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good poem about a flower and its comparison to the poet's lover. The flower grows in the poet's garden and gives a lot pride to him. It inspires him about his love who is very expressive. The poetry has a lot of good points. The comparisons make reading helpful. It reminds us of the flower as an example of love.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a nice story about a dog who does not accustom itself to potty training. Dogs are a man's best friend and can be difficult to train sometimes. The story is interesting and makes us learn about dogs and their behavior. The writing is simple and concrete. The font size is a bit smaller than usual.
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Review of Prism  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good story about a girl dreaming about a mysterious stranger. The writing keeps us in suspense as to why the stranger is calling out her name. Her finally waking up reveals it be just a dream. Well written and crafted. A good idea to write about a dream and hence a good read.


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Review of Close Your Eyes  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a nice poem about closing your eyes to understand the real you. We are reflections of our soul and hence we should take time out to understand ourselves and our souls. The writing is good and the poetry is good to read. We should all close our eyes and think about ourselves every other day.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is a good story about a person's encounter with a beautiful voice. It makes us understand how we can be taken over by people's voices on the phone. The final meeting with a twenty five year old makes it surprising. The writing is clear and simple. The author conveys the idea of the story in a lucid manner.
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Review of A Fear of Flying  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a good poem about the fear of flying. The protagonist thinks she is the only survivor and all the rest are dead. This makes the reading interesting. It is fun to read a imaginative narrative about people around us. The man's crying out for a flight attendant is amusing.
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Review of Black Water  
Review by Soulraider
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a nice poetry titled black water. The form is Shakespearean sonnet and makes interesting reading. The lines "A soft exhale. The vapors lightly dance;their rainbow colors fading in the night." are nice. They add a lot of meaning to the poem. The last lines are the opposite. They say "Inhale! I find the peace I sought is gone.Within this dream, I find myself a pawn.". Quite a good effort at good poetry.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a good memoir about the author's experience of losing her grandmother. Her family is large and her connection to her grandma is extraordinary. The writing is impressive as it makes reading interesting. It is well written and has to be commended. The event changed her life forever and this gives us a glimpse of how people are so connected to their loved ones.
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Review by Soulraider
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a good poem of a place where the world bleeds white. It is short and sweet. The lines "I inhale the fragrance of your passing" is significant. It tells us how we can smell others presence. The color of blood is white in this place and it makes us think why.


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